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Old 01-09-06, 02:50 AM   #1
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2. N.Tavarez vs. 33. The Revelation

IP: A0C8 44A9

Check in by Wednesday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.
Drop verse by Friday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.

16 Lines.

No Recycling.
No Biting.
No Feeding.

Good Luck..

Come Dope.
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Old 01-09-06, 08:31 AM   #2
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Betchu I Drop 1st................
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Old 01-09-06, 06:05 PM   #3
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Probably will cuz I've got exams.
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^^I think this explains my view on gangster rap perfectly.
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Old 01-10-06, 11:05 AM   #4
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*straight for the jugular, in a nice friendly only bleed a lil and die way*
look at his avatar and read slowly, john ratzinger is the pope btw


Look
This fights fixed, you've been set up! It'll be done fast
Even in bibles..... Revelations predicted to come last
U aint been good in a while and in ya pics you shouldnt smile
I'd mop the floor wit U, but ya hair might scratch my wooden tiles
Not a chance you'll advance, my Arm-stronger than Lance, son
You attracting ass kickings and Im quick to handsome
DMC they got me facing...... I'll dismantle his flow
And make Rev Run so quick they'll have to cancel his show
You fat fuck, they wont send you to war in your country
His hungry ass thought Desert Storm was last call for the munchies
He the brunette shrek, bleached out funny and queer
And if you pawn that cross you hold you'd owe em money for years
So when my fist Rome ya face I'ma clown you with ease
You've Benedict so long, John Ratzinger bows down at your knees
Stick to topicals, I'm topping you and hell if I tried
Cuz you so wack even ya area code is telling us lies (989)
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Old 01-13-06, 11:05 AM   #5
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uppin so revelations can grow balls and post his verse already...........
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Old 01-13-06, 10:54 PM   #6
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-_-

Taverez' lines are more fragil that china, and I ain't talkin bout their plates,
You had 29 days, but ya times over you washed up so quit cuz ya too late.
Fate was written years ago, like a medeviel prophecy you never come true,
Shhhh, hear that?...Me neither no wonder no one can really respect you.
Ya a yankee man, there's no way I can see you coming on top of ya game,
You just joke around, no wonder ya team choked on their field and you did the same.
First he was kinda shitty, now he's just a piece of the puzzle in the field of letters,
His...lines...are...more...chopped...up...than...t he...cheese...on...my...dinner.
Not many things I can say bout hotshh, but there reason for that is obvious,
No one knows ya, just like the homeless that get missed by the census.
2 weeks and ya still got no creativity, man I guess what they say is true,
You don't fall far from ya neighborhood, no wonder you only hotter than, who?
You aint hotshh man, you just a dude who can't even get an online award,
You could be a construction worker, but either way you still leave us board.
Kinda hot and kinda cold, he quit at the first sign of someone givin competition,
Musta realized that he in himself was the only person he was even, kinda dissin.
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Old 01-14-06, 12:39 AM   #7
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This fights fixed, you've been set up! It'll be done fast
Even in bibles..... Revelations predicted to come last
Not a chance you'll advance, my Arm-stronger than Lance, son
You attracting ass kickings and Im quick to handsome
DMC they got me facing...... I'll dismantle his flow
And make Rev Run so quick they'll have to cancel his show
You fat fuck, they wont send you to war in your country
His hungry ass thought Desert Storm was last call for the munchies

vs.

Not many things I can say bout hotshh, but there reason for that is obvious,
No one knows ya, just like the homeless that get missed by the census.

Vote - N.Tavarez
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Old 01-14-06, 04:01 AM   #8
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This fights fixed, you've been set up! It'll be done fast
Even in bibles..... Revelations predicted to come last
Not a chance you'll advance, my Arm-stronger than Lance, son
You attracting ass kickings and Im quick to handsome
So when my fist Rome ya face I'ma clown you with ease
You've Benedict so long, John Ratzinger bows down at your knees
(Those lines were dope and shit)

vs.

Nothing

v/Hotshh
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Old 01-14-06, 10:20 PM   #9
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uppin for votes hoes
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Old 01-14-06, 10:26 PM   #10
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Quote:
Originally Posted by N.Tavarez
This fights fixed, you've been set up! It'll be done fast
Even in bibles..... Revelations predicted to come last

Not a chance you'll advance, my Arm-stronger than Lance, son
You attracting ass kickings and Im quick to handsome

You fat fuck, they wont send you to war in your country
His hungry ass thought Desert Storm was last call for the munchies


V/ N.T. ^^^ Awesome
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Old 01-14-06, 10:55 PM   #11
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Hotshh clear your PM's homo!
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Old 01-15-06, 01:43 AM   #12
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Not a chance you'll advance, my Arm-stronger than Lance, son
You attracting ass kickings and Im quick to handsome
DMC they got me facing...... I'll dismantle his flow
And make Rev Run so quick they'll have to cancel his show
You fat fuck, they wont send you to war in your country
His hungry ass thought Desert Storm was last call for the munchies
He the brunette shrek, bleached out funny and queer
And if you pawn that cross you hold you'd owe em money for years
So when my fist Rome ya face I'ma clown you with ease
You've Benedict so long, John Ratzinger bows down at your knees

Vs
Not many things I can say bout hotshh, but there reason for that is obvious,
No one knows ya, just like the homeless that get missed by the census.
You aint hotshh man, you just a dude who can't even get an online award,
You could be a construction worker, but either way you still leave us board.

Hot got this....most his shit was fresh an not played he came wit some good personals that were hard hittin an quoted....rev u had a couple of good lines but ur verse wasnt consistent ur punchs didnt hit...u had some played shit....V/N.Tavarez
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Old 01-15-06, 08:47 AM   #13
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This fights fixed, you've been set up! It'll be done fast
Even in bibles..... Revelations predicted to come last
U aint been good in a while and in ya pics you shouldnt smile
I'd mop the floor wit U, but ya hair might scratch my wooden tiles
DMC they got me facing...... I'll dismantle his flow
And make Rev Run so quick they'll have to cancel his show
So when my fist Rome ya face I'ma clown you with ease
You've Benedict so long, John Ratzinger bows down at your knees

some funny stuff

handsome wordplay is played

vs.

Not many things I can say bout hotshh, but there reason for that is obvious,
No one knows ya, just like the homeless that get missed by the census.
You aint hotshh man, you just a dude who can't even get an online award,
You could be a construction worker, but either way you still leave us board.

and those weren't good just better than your others. Revelation is too new, no hate, just needs to come less stretched and use less newb-type punches. More practice and you'll get there

v/hotsh
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Old 01-15-06, 05:21 PM   #14
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Not a chance you'll advance, my Arm-stronger than Lance, son
You attracting ass kickings and Im quick to handsome

^ Fuckin' ill.
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Old 01-15-06, 06:00 PM   #15
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im sorry, this was kinda obvious...
V/ Hot
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