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k-uh i wasnt really feelin your verse...i have seen u come harder.....it seemed like u just didnt care and it showed.......your punches were not very creative and your punches didnt land very well.....i wasnt impressed wit ya verse.....4/10

ill testament-nice verse...u had some nice personals and punches...i felt ya verse was very creative.....this was a nice verse.......the only thing i didnt like was the fact that u explained ya punches....stay away from that cuz it is newbish....other than that decent verse.......6/10

v/ill........no hate

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.:K:.

Fuck this coward smash you till your devoured…and leave him seeping,
Fuck wordplay cause that^ had more than your whole verse…
……………......…so kid keep dreaming……….

first line is pretty good.......wasnt feelin the punch in the second line.....

merk this kid for beefing...everything's against you..nothing for..
lyrical joker..your just pissing about...read the shit in bold..
.....................over to state wat you are......

ok frist line.......wasn't feelin the punch in the second line..........coulda been worded better also......

I guess it was your mum who first told you…………
…………………..that you were really special…………,
But to be honest man ive seen straighter fucking….. comeing from a homosexual,

pretty tight wordplay in the second line..........pretty good punch......first line was aight........

K spitting into a mirror is the only way i’ll ever meet my match,
Me turning on you to face away..was the best ive seen you spit back,

first line is played..........as well as the second line.........

Its special K…..kelloggs brand but im not that type of cereal killer,
I own this battle with the outline..and leave this bitch to add all filler,

i liked the first line.........second line was an ok closer.........coulda been worded better also.......

CONCLUSION - structure was ok........didnt like the whole line wit periods, then the rest of the text.......flow was a lil hard to catch on to........vocab was pretty good.........multis were good........some of the wordplay was tight........ok punches..........didnt see any good personals......

OVERALL - 6.5/10

ILL TESTAMENT

I Wanted This Due In 24 Hours, But .:K:. Needs A Week..
Replaying My Words, Is The Closest Way Youd B Unique..

pretty good opener.......first line was nice.......second line was a lil played but still pretty good.....

Got A Straight Answer From Feeble..Get Better To Be Elite..
Punches Bruise Ya Cheek, Yous A Dog, The Way He Bites Treats..

tight first line......feelin this personal..........second line was pretty good......

Like Fat Customers At McDonalds, .:K:. Really Wanted This Beef..
Beat U With 6 Lines ^, Couldnt Steal This Win If You Were A Thief..

good wordplay and punch on the first line...........ok wordplay on the second.....

Told Him That I Didnt Want Beef, But He Really Wanted To Be Sick..
Thinking That You Hard? Please, Im Giving You This Loss Quick..

ok first line.....wasnt feelin the second line.......

He Knew That I'd Beat Him, So He Posted In The Guided Mode..
"Thats Impossible Sorry" "Can You Image Me Winning On Adobe?"

tight ass closer.........nice punch........ill personal..........good wordplay......shit was fire..........

CONCLUSION - ill had good structure........flow was on target.........vocab was good.......the multis were ok........wordplay was tight.........punches hit hard.........ill personals.....

OVERALL - 8/10

VOTE - ILL TESTAMENT

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Gud battle, here is how I saw it

Ill Testament: You had a nice flow with sum gud wordplay and a lot of variation; your punches came thru hard and they were nice formulated; you has a cuople of personals but too many, I would like to see more personals from you; you also did great in multis; your structure was aight, but nothin special
I give it 7/10

.:k:. : Your flow was a little off cuz I din't saw a gud wordplay, there wasn't a lot of variation; you had sum ok punches but they din't came so hard as Ill; you had played personals with no originality, You need to work on this man; your structure was whack cuz it just din't felt right
I give it 4/10

Vote: Ill Testament

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Wins: Lust (5-1)
Bettws (5-0)
Rappin' Master (5-1)
Baz187 (5-0)
Young 5 Mic(s) (5-3)
Losses: Timeless (DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)
Bonez1000(DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)

Ill..
I Wanted This Due In 24 Hours, But .:K:. Needs A Week..*
Replaying My Words, Is The Closest Way Youd B Unique..**
Ok..pretty personal.. alright opener
Got A Straight Answer From Feeble..Get Better To Be Elite..***
Punches Bruise Ya Cheek, Yous A Dog, The Way He Bites Treats..
..The first line is a fact, not a punch..2d played & wack..
Like Fat Customers At McDonalds, .:K:. Really Wanted This Beef..****
Beat U With 6 Lines ^, Couldnt Steal This Win If You Were A Thief..
Umm no, 2d line is exceptionally played & 1d?...far from..
Told Him That I Didnt Want Beef, But He Really Wanted To Be Sick..*****
Thinking That You Hard? Please, Im Giving You This Loss Quick..
Not really either.. get more creative
He Knew That I'd Beat Him, So He Posted In The Guided Mode..
"Thats Impossible Sorry" "Can You Image Me Winning On Adobe?"******
..That is actually pretty nice, with some rewordin' this could've been,
A funny & good punch.. not bad

K
Fuck this coward smash you till your devoured…and leave him seeping,
Fuck wordplay cause that^ had more than your whole verse…
……………......…so kid keep dreaming……….
..The dreamin' part should've been somethin associated w. wordplay,
Or somewhat like that.. for a more direct & connectin punch
merk this kid for beefing...everything's against you..nothing for..
lyrical joker..your just pissing about...read the shit in bold..
.....................over to state wat you are......
The concept was ok.. but truth is..he is a kid lol, not a real punch
I guess it was your mum who first told you…………
…………………..that you were really special…………,
But to be honest man ive seen straighter fucking….. comeing from a homosexual,
Nothin fancy..but got a giggle none the less..slightly funny
K spitting into a mirror is the only way i’ll ever meet my match,
Me turning on you to face away..was the best ive seen you spit back,
Wordplay in 2d line is ok..other then that self glorification
Its special K…..kelloggs brand but im not that type of cereal killer,
I own this battle with the outline..and leave this bitch to add all filler,
Yup..self glorification

Overall
I expected more from K to be quite honest..
& Ill testament kind of surprised me..not as herbish as most ppl in Fl..
But fact to the matter is.. all those supposed personals you had,
& tried to indicate & explain with all these stars (****)
Didnt work..
Also in a line u say:
"Got A Straight Answer From Feeble..Get Better To Be Elite"
..Then u go to explain.. that he was declined by Feeble..
Like we are to stupid to see that.. you explain the obvious.
Also your punches where far to simplistic & that whole play on mad cow disease is ridiculous.. & on top of that... played.
K didnt had a real good verse either..
A pretty nice structure.. though your flow was a bit choppy at points.
You came pretty consistant with some ok punches..right down to the last bar..
Where u kind of slowed it down.
But still, You get my vote for nothin explainin' all these useless facts..
& actually havin some punches..

vote K

..thx alot yall...........................uppin for real votes..................(5).thx...........pz