that shit was not worth listening to,, you need a lot of improvemetn,, put some incinuation on ya words son,, freal, plus you sound a lil gay on ya tracks,, that prob ya accent or some shit but it comes off like that,, and wut up wit his 6 bar battle verses,, your shit is wayyy to fucking short,, but oh well,, i wasnt feeling it at all,,

~rhymes~
Brooklyn NYC nigga,
check the thread where im at and check the status,, ~1~