10 -20 lines
I spit 1st
no dr/ hate

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Killin this Newbie

smokin' this victim, putting a chokehold on your system,
ya past gay, lookin' like Ashtray from Dont Be A Menace!
one joke and your finished! quickly make imposters lose pride,
Kid Lyrics? nobody's really felt those since Dr. Seuss died..
abuse guys! have a seat... You best to observe me,
like the T'Wolves, sitting home... watchin the rest of the tourney!
blessing this herb, see? wondering *Where is the challenge?*
after my verse stops ya Improvement.. like FOX did Tim Allen's!
advancing? im winning it valiantly, with a killer mentality,
tough? in Mortal Kombat; you chose Friendships over Fatalities!
attacks are weak! with intros just as lame as your name,
your flow is groundbreaking, yup.. already created its grave..
blatant disgrace! as stated above... puttin this boy in a hole,
outta ya mind? only sick online... calling poison control!
annoyed with ya flow... no groom, how are you the best, man?
you rock MICs in shows? only when rapping on your webcam!
left dead fam, serving Martini's.. only time you controllin bars,
putting fire to dude... its no Title for you, like stolen cars!
swole his jaw! print your threads.. throw em at this wack bastard,
'What More Can I Say?', you wont make it past Track 2 on the Black Album!


ight

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hold up wait a minute is this kat fo real
this nigga didn rhyme once wuts his deal

u walk a round like u sum1 wit ye held held hi up
step to me like that easy way to get ya chest pumped up

u sound like u prewrote that shyt layin in ur room
to bad its garbage were u mayb on shrooms

ur horrible at this game mayb u should get tutored
fuckin wit me k dog n easy way to get nuetered

ur a bitch u suck just anotha herb ill merk
i ripped this in 6 min cuz i dun respect ya work

y waste mah tyme wen ur rhymes aint worth mah skill
thats it im done suicide a good option i herd theres a pill

left that out on accident good luck kid

MAy THE BEST MAN win sry i cant vote for no one peace

please dont call me a kid Im 25 years of age. thanks

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the duce to me had better wordplay in this battle.. his verse was more complexed than crunches.. crunches verse was short but lacked any realy hard disses.. most of his verse was filler

i felt like the duce used more creaive punchlines and better peronals than crunch did in this battle

vote- the duce

hit this battle up please.. thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113409

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single file, single files hoes come on in

MAy THE BEST MAN win sry i cant vote for no one peace

the duce took this 1 as crunch verse lacked punches that hit and personals

duce had the better wordplay better disses unlike crunch

both structures were ok but i say crunch took this 1 but crunch structures dont win battles so exchange ya structure 4 dope lines

basically crunch ur verse was played and it looked newbie ish..y u got the lines spaces in between ur lines???
the duce was alot stronger in this and u cud tell he is a lot better as his verse is structured out in a decent enuf way......

n e way enuf of ma typin but sorry crunch no h8 or nuffin but the duce takes this 1

before i cum and poll vote cud u both cum and poll vote and put a honest vote wit a decent explanation on ma battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113153

once u hit that up wit a honest vote and a poll i will cum bk and hit this up wit my poll

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i personally like crunches shit , tha duce shit hit harder and crunches just rhymed

damn mother fucker poll vote.. dont write shit like poll vote for mine and then ill come back and poll vote for you. to me that just nothin more than bull shit DR grow up and poll vote

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aight some votes Please, poll votes.......................

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uppin for votes
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