Voted For: (X)eed

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"deep" as flows even if he could "mobb' his styles still amataure
kids quite low. tryna "dick" "ass" deep as a "hole"
keeps goin.............................. but thats how far he goes..
well nothing rhymes there... but o well... it started all right with the mobb and deep line but you just kill it...
commited to be a "stayer", but way "over" his "period"
"rushin" like a river,"floss" like "bacteria" still quite leniant
ok wtf... you would have been better not to write that.
that line gets a 0/47265092749 on any day
dumb "ass" still "lickin" to be slowly "quiet" famous
good at ............"lettin one go" quite slowly from tha anus
lol... pretty funny line there... good to have a funny line in a verse somewere... keeps the reader interested...
lookin down i made a "B.I.G." hole in tha man's "lil" head
"kim"s his real name. hes goin...down... wit a "notorious' death
alright wordplay here... you need to strutute it better...
kid's small he be "runnin' before he even took his 1st step....
good line here... but you needed another line before it leading into it...

struture is alright... you need to think your bars through first tho... you've killed every bar except for you "fart" bar by writting bullshit.... THINK.
good closer tho... pretty good...

nigga, u cant get the top, quit callin yaself a champ when ya not
cause i'll "place seed(ceed) in the ground" like "planting a crop"
nigga... <- DONT use that word... it's not needed and is wasting space,
alright intro...
you stand in the spot of being weak, rv's hating your style, son
you wanna perform, i'll "shoot X while he on stage"...
....................................like the "Islamic Nation did Malcolm"
If your going to drop a line and have a pause to make your punch more effective.... make sure its a good punch in the first place cause thats pretty lame
i hold hatred, i'm violent ..idont get confused, ya keys are weak
you exceed all expectations? RV expected you to be wack
............................................why you aint exceed from that?
first of all dont say shit like "i hold hatred" i couldnt actualy give a fuck if you hold hatred or if your holding your balls.... in a battle you need to focus on your oopsition not on yourself... but good punch here none the less
dont even rap, you wack and you know it, you wont go far
you like "trash wishing it could be somethin else"
..........................."you dont wanna be garbage, but you are"
Good punch here... nothing special
never be flawless with the bars, you dont phase me, u will lose
in skills, only time we'll hear about "ceed(seed) growing"...
....................................is talking bout a "baby in the womb"
weak closer... saying stuff like... "you will lose..." is just stupid extra bull crap and you trying to make things rhyme... DONT DO IT

your shit flows like your constipated... mainly becuase you have to many words in your bars!... having your last line droped with a pause.... should only be used once on a really good line... you used it for all of them which is a waste and made your punches less effective... You need to work on your vocab

I would say that looking at this battle deep flows you have the better verse but your style and lack of vocab and severe lack of flow just kills you...
ceed your verse had some good ideas in it but you really need to learn how to set them out better ok and you'll be very dangerous..
deep... shorten your bars... ceed.... learn to spell...

overall vote goes to xceed... you won me over with your fart line...
deep you need to work on getting more interesting things in your verse... i could basically predict what you were going to say... ceed you were a bit more random and interesting...

no hate... peace

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