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Old 12-14-03, 09:09 AM   #1
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"sometimes" FIRE!!!!!!!plz check

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ok this is my first time doing this

Produced by: Postman
Arranged by: Postman

Verse1: cream - chorus/second verse cannibus - verse3: cassidy
this beat is free so if you want to spit over it holla at me.

Sometimes:
http://www.soundclick.com/util/Stre...?ID=767243&q=hi
http://www.soundclick.com/util/Stre...?ID=767243&q=lo

if you just wanna bang the instrumental
Sometimes (instrumental)
http://www.soundclick.com/util/Stre...?ID=767256&q=lo
http://www.soundclick.com/util/Stre...?ID=767256&q=hi

feedback is appreciated.
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Old 12-14-03, 10:55 AM   #2
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Imma be honest with you cuz, it won;t make you beter me lying to you....

As far as the instumental, I wasn't feeling it. It sound more like a R&B track than a hip-hop song..which brings me too

I dont; know why you would put sombody as hard as Canibus on a beat liek that, I mean.....Its not even on beat anyway, Rea, Cani or Cassidy are all off beat as hell. You gonna have to learn the sync your vocals and don;t just throw shit on top of a beat.

By all means keep working at it though, homie. Thats how you get better......
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Old 12-14-03, 11:04 AM   #3
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^ feel you.... the cannibus shit wasnt intended to be a release or nuttin... just somethin to show that you could spit over it. as far as the beat well different strokes for different folks. i mean like 5 people told me they was feelin it and some dont.. yea its more on a slow emotional tip dog. i could see someone singing the hook.
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Old 12-16-03, 06:21 PM   #4
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its pretty good...its on some R&B...but on some spittin shit too...hook is aight...i hear more spitting on this than singing though...so, its a start...keep it up.

oh...i just peeped the instrumental and not the one with the vocals.

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