Battle Rules:

6-10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 tko

Minimum posts to vote: 150

Check in by: 10-11-05 at 08:01 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Apostrophe has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-10-05 08:55 PM.

I spit hard on your verse… Leaving this battle damp….
&& no one would have fun watching your words play even if..
…………………………..you were the scrabble champ…
I Predict A KO’ the whole way.. I’ll be Routing this Fool…
Cause The Odd’s Are Against You.. Like Counting By Two’s…
From Detroit, Piston Fan? Kid give me a reason..
You wont rebound from this loss.. Like Ben Wallace..
……………………………………….last season..
Yeah you can write a verse but G you cant kill with it..
While I Lodge mine soo far down your throat…
…………………………………..........S kiers will Chill in it…

Thank You Sir...

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My Lines Are ILL yo

Mystic Chaos has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-11-05 02:28 PM.

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A LIFE OF CHRYME

ayyo, good battle right here......even though you told me you were going 6 lines thats iight lol g'luck

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A LIFE OF CHRYME

^fuck my last post, we agreed to go 8...duh...im an idiot

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A LIFE OF CHRYME

uppin..............................for............ ........................votes...................

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A LIFE OF CHRYME

up up and away....................................

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My Lines Are ILL yo

ok i left a vote for mystic but it said i checked the pollz...when this is my first response....this is what i had.......haha im liking mystic chaos lil more he had much better punches and his structure was good unlike Apostrophe...that was just weird structure but yeah iight battle ...yeah and that mosquito line lmao man funny shit

/v mystic chaos

umm....ok......................................... ...................

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A LIFE OF CHRYME

lol @ my structure being weird.. when the majority of the site uses it... meh.. its coo.. nice battle mystic.. no offense to u tho.. but i think u have some corny lines.. like mosquito line and the sweater line.. they just sound like jokes flipped in to punchlines.. but u def have alot of potential.. word up.. + im upping this shit

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Voted For: Mystic Chaos

[Mystic Chaos]

You wanna be a net thug with rhymes cheesier than cheddar
The only Hood that you reppin is on the back of your sweater
7/10, if u worded it different da effect woulda been stronger
Lack of brains,you cant think of 4s so your mettas paused*
N you aint got no flow man like you have mettapause
5/10, kinda old punch man
You wasn't never meant to be born. I swear it was accident
You talkin mean game for being a veteran in abstinance
7/10, feelin this line...shit was iight
Dawg you aint get girls, ill end it...yo this shits feneto
Girls c between ya legs, think you got bit by a mosquito
8/10, lmao funniest line in ya verse altogether


[Apostrophe]

I spit hard on your verse… Leaving this battle damp….
&& no one would have fun watching your words play even if..
…………………………..you were the scrabble champ…
3/10, didnt move me
I Predict A KO’ the whole way.. I’ll be Routing this Fool…
Cause The Odd’s Are Against You.. Like Counting By Two’s…
5/10, ehh that was iight nothin new though
From Detroit, Piston Fan? Kid give me a reason..
You wont rebound from this loss.. Like Ben Wallace..
……………………………………….last season..
5/10, that was iight but u word it sloppy
Yeah you can write a verse but G you cant kill with it..
While I Lodge mine soo far down your throat…
…………………………………..........S kiers will Chill in it…
6/10, probably ya strongest line but not too serious


multiz- neither
punchlines- mystic (less played)
personals- tie
flow/structure- mystic (apos thru me off wit all da dots)
humor/enjoyment- mystic (his lines were more appealin)
wordplay- mystic
creativity- both were creative jus used old concepts


OVERALL VOTE= mystic chaos


if i have one up, vote in it BOTH of yall...1

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Voted For: Apostrophe

You wanna be a net thug with rhymes cheesier than cheddar
The only Hood that you reppin is on the back of your sweater
3...i remember doing a hood line like this before...and that was in the cyphers...so,for a written line...this was bad.
Lack of brains,you cant think of 4s so your mettas paused*
N you aint got no flow man like you have mettapause
3....didn't like this..why?..becuz for the reader to catch it..we'd have to read the explanation.And explaining punches is considered atrocious nowadays.
You wasn't never meant to be born. I swear it was accident
You talkin mean game for being a veteran in abstinance
4...bah...decent,i guess........tho i actually remember using an abstinance line in cypers as well..LoL.
Dawg you aint get girls, ill end it...yo this shits feneto
Girls c between ya legs, think you got bit by a mosquito
4....bah....

I spit hard on your verse… Leaving this battle damp….
&& no one would have fun watching your words play even if..
…………………………..you were the scrabble champ…
4.....didn't like how u had the dots 'n shit.decent punch nevertheless.
I Predict A KO’ the whole way.. I’ll be Routing this Fool…
Cause The Odd’s Are Against You.. Like Counting By Two’s…
3...nah...sounded cheesy.
From Detroit, Piston Fan? Kid give me a reason..
You wont rebound from this loss.. Like Ben Wallace..
……………………………………….last season..
5...Dope concept..but again...why the fuck you had the dots?..just weakened the punch by makin us pause for no reason.
Yeah you can write a verse but G you cant kill with it..
While I Lodge mine soo far down your throat…
…………………………………..........S kiers will Chill in it…
5....good.

OK...compared to the majority of battles in Fl,this was good.
Apos....
Well...you had some good punches 'n shit..but u had dots in there that fuked it up a bit.Like..when we readin it..the dots make us pause and it's annoying.So stop that.Only line that sucked was the countin by 2's one..as that was just cheesy.The others were ite.

Mystic...
You had played lines.Hood/sweater,Abstinance...both played concepts that u used.And the metta's pause line..i didn't like it due to the fact that no one would be able to understand it if u didn't explain.

Also...how is it ur verse in our battle was sooooooo much better than ANY other shit u wrote?
it was a whole different style and everything....pre-writing doesn't allow u to conjour a verse beyond ur own level like that.
This just leads me to MORE suspicion that u bit it from somewhere...

Anyways...
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