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Voted For: metaman


Metaman
Nice Flow Man I Was Feeling This One Through Out Your Whole Verse, Punches Was Here And Hitting Well Man, Personals Ey, Man It Was Dope, Wordplay Yo This Was One Sided Man, Metaman Verse Was More Elevated, Punches Was His Best In Here, And Vocab Good Job

Evo
Nice Verse, It Was Alright Towards The Begining But The Ending Was Where It Fell Of Man Elevate, Throw Some Multi's In Here And Meta's And You'll Be Doing Wel, Also Up Your Vocabulary Man

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Voted For: Evolution

metaman

u had a decent verse some decent diss, flow was aight personal was ok but u could of came at him harder and more celever ur punches could of been harder as-well but a decent verse

this dick is out his zone so now imma handle you quick,
you da best poet? faggot i aint maya angelou bitch,*
text cuz you weak cant stand in the same ring or ill end ya,
even if yo name was sly you wouldnt be a contender,**
you evolved from a poet to the wackest site member,
change your name to clef cause imma banish you til november,
you picked this fight with me makes me think yo head be a mess,
i done cramped you left you bloody cause of yo p-m-s,***

decent verse 7/10

Evolution
ya verse was more celever and was hitting harder with punches good flow as-well good vocab , tight verse

I’ll come half-assed, & your rhymes are easy to break like foam
But your punches are getting old too...
................................................go put them in the retirement home
This kid thinks this is all fun & games, hah, your just prattle*
You’d have to get an alias...
to vote on your own matches, just for you to win your battles
Look at this hoe, trying to act ill, your punches won’t even hit
His drop is loud, cuz not even deaf peeps don’t want to hear it
Why am I facing you? You’re just a waste of time
You’ll never elevate son...
...cuz you already having trouble trying to rhyme

tight drop 9/10

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Voted For: Evolution

Evolution.....nice shit structure was good flow was on point...shit was kinda weak in some areas but you made the differnce with your personals.........if you had a real COMPeTITION then this would have bee n alot better.....because this kid is a newb...he actaully bolded some one words to make his bars work....lol
but yeah some shit was dope.///the drop is loud, cuz not even deaf peeps don't want 2 hear it line was nice

Metaman......nice shit but wack at the same time...your structure was mad weak yo...youve been on this site for along itm now and your shit is still wack yo.....try to stay with one name or just be more consistant in battling yo...
but good for a newb..........stay up and elevate....
one love yo

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Voted For: Evolution

u won fam...i dont gota explian dis shit....just off ya personal it was betta than meta's whole verse

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^^he's scared.lol

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Voted For: metaman

metaman
this dick is out his zone so now imma handle you quick,
you da best poet? faggot i aint maya angelou bitch,*
text cuz you weak cant stand in the same ring or ill end ya,
even if yo name was sly you wouldnt be a contender,**
you evolved from a poet to the wackest site member,
change your name to clef cause imma banish you til november,
you picked this fight with me makes me think yo head be a mess,
i done cramped you left you bloody cause of yo p-m-s,***

like your punches
lotz of personals
good structure
elevation wuz nice too
8/10

evolution
I’ll come half-assed, & your rhymes are easy to break like foam
But your punches are getting old too...
................................................go put them in the retirement home
This kid thinks this is all fun & games, hah, your just prattle*
You’d have to get an alias...
to vote on your own matches, just for you to win your battles
Look at this hoe, trying to act ill, your punches won’t even hit
His drop is loud, cuz not even deaf peeps don’t want to hear it
Why am I facing you? You’re just a waste of time
You’ll never elevate son...
...cuz you already having trouble trying to rhyme

work on structure sum lines were hard 2 read
elevate a lil bit more
work on gettn sum more punches at opponent
7/10
no hate

v/metaman

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