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03-09-05, 06:39 AM
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STROBE's Favorite Rapper
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OS1RIS vs MC NOTORIOUS
IP: F798 D455
Check In By FRIDAY Or Topic Wont Be Given Poems Due By SUNDAY. Edit You Link With At Least 2 Other Poetry Battles In The League You Voted On Voting Ends At 12 Eastern TimeON WENSDAY NITE NEXT WEEK.no Line Length And Dont Write A Topical. This Is A Poetry League I Will Dq You If You Write A Fucking Topical I Hate That Shit Its Not Poetry!! Winners Recieve 100,000 R.v Sorry No Shows Dont Get Paied You Gotta Actually Win Good Luck To BotH
TOPIC=WHIRLPOOL I am closing this but if you want to know who won, I will set it up in front lines or something if you'd like...
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03-09-05, 08:11 AM
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[ a.k.a Os ]
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IP: F519 0F67
checkin in in in in
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03-09-05, 12:38 PM
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Only the Illist
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IP: 8BC7 013B
check.......................
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03-13-05, 03:27 PM
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Only the Illist
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IP: 8BC7 013B
Caught in the waves i twist and turn my mind begins to clound, my lungs begin to burn i fear im going down... lifes end is near my fate has been sealed and i see it all so clear with the white light ahead, in my mind i repent for all the wrong i have done, all the pain ive sent wrongs become right as my end begins to set as i slip i remember my life and all the people ive met i remember back when jennifer passed away will i meet her again as my lifes flame turns to gray answers that in time will be told.. soon i will see all ive ever contemplated and questioned will be in front of me deeply i fall churning in the pools whirl slipping away with every sweltering swirl i close my eyes and to the world i begin to say my goodbyes light surrounds me.. a hand on my shoulder... i die |
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03-13-05, 04:22 PM
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[ a.k.a Os ]
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IP: F519 0F67
Water spins lightly around my heated slate I think about the life I’ve been given How I have come to be the man I am How will I reach to the... become the man I want As these ideas whirl in my astral planar of my thoughts I dream of the world that was once only as big as I could see This constant swirling wasn’t an obstacle to overcome or battle Welcomed was the wet feel on my clothes Past days weren’t bothersome to my relaxation This day where the longer I spun I had no patience The weight of God wasn’t so heavy on my shoulders Times where everything is crashing into one another I feel the water gently upon my eyes Tears and oxygen mixed together Angels cry for the living and we cry for the dead My soul aches and no prescription can eliminate the torture I feel the water shuffle down the corners of my eyes I feel these weights bear on my mind body and soul I feel that these times are very rough… so very rough Tears and rain angels cry and I cry Eternal pity, agony, will spin till I die…
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