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Old 12-05-04, 08:26 PM   #1
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drug dealer

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i got tons of guns, and i slang lots of rocks/
i got money funds, and i hustle these blocks/
i can't sell u none, cuz there be all da cops/
i don't wanna run, their bullets make me drop/
come back tomorrow, if you got the cash/
i can't let u borrow, from my bosses stash/
because he'd kill me mayne, he'd kill u too/
i don't like feelin pain, i don't think its cool/
my boss he'd go insain, leave me in a blood pool/
than he'd get in his range, and he'd come for you/
i'm a drug dealer, u could call me a snitch/
it don't get no realer, i would kill u bitch/
i sell lots of dope, and i also cook it/
take ya cake u don't know, who took it/
make the cleanest nigga go, crooked/
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Old 12-06-04, 04:36 AM   #2
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thsi was wack u cam to wanna be gangster lol drop that and work on ur vocab u got good flow u should do audio lol
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Old 12-06-04, 09:13 AM   #3
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very simple.flow was good,everything else was really basic.try to make it more complex.keep em comin'
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Old 12-06-04, 04:22 PM   #4
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Yall Say Its Wack Cuz U Dont Understand Westcoast Hip Hop, This Was Koo Man, I No Wat U Talkin Bout, Keep It Up
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Old 12-06-04, 04:40 PM   #5
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It Wasnt Bad, But Yo Need To Work On It Some...its To Gangsta Really...but No Hate...keep It Up...7/10...~1~
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