drop (10 +)
no: hate, d/r, biting, or recycling

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yo lemme kick dis shit right about now


I flow wit da best of em, you fuck wit me u gon die like the rest of em/
CROZZY bitch i come and take yo life away, rip out yo heart and sell that shit on ebay/
cuz i dont play dawg, leave da gun and knives on the shelf, rearrange ya face like steven seagal/u just another bitch like jaime foxx i got ya on my booty call/
V A i kill u every fuckin way put a knife to ya neck, fill ya with lead wit my tech, leavin holes in ya chest, bombin ya like a fuckin math test/
When i get up on dis mic i raise hell like 2pac/
Im startin to develop a crew on dis battle shit so u know im rollin wit 10 glocks/
dawg if i had ur screen name you damn sho would get ur ass blocked/
layin a smack down on yo ass, homie call me da Rock/
you wanna fuckin stop my flow but u cant compete wit dis freestyle/
call me muthafuckin Lotto, cuz i just left ya lookin like Eminem in 8 mile//

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this "clown" flows straight comedy, //flip tha basics cuz hes 'handin vowels'.
my show is ''stand up'', i frown all who is spammin or 'withstandin fouls'.
well be here all day as he PROOONNNOOUUNNCCCEESS (pronounces)-his-words.
spittin slime at his nurse, while she 'spooning' (feeding) him lines 4 his 'down-sindrome-verse'.
sumone tell 'em its worse to go thru with facing my spine bended flow.
you should'a just choked, on a lego peice, you knew wusnt but pretended was dough.
people might feel sorry for you if you quit, ........NOT ME " you fuckin retard".
he keyin his verse with "win a battle free card", read mine and wus searchin for 'tha button restart'.
if this was a plea-bargin. you wud hav a good shot at all titles.
including the "fucking hunnington idol" , wedding rivals, and even contridictin tha bible.
but no matter the stances, im there to narrow your path.
not just my ass, but yor lifes a good example of the vast random cast of God's wrath.
this battle lathers me in cash, as if i were on a "tha-price-is-right".
yor on RB all day, cuz nobody takin you out, cuz cancer will enhances when lights is bright.
these dice arent white, cuz snake eyes turn red wen their bouts to strike./
this bitch, is straight fearin tha bite of a sider at night, he be havin daddy checkin tha closet .. makin sure .:VA:. aint occuping tha site.

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V A i kill u every fuckin way put a knife to ya neck, fill ya with lead wit my tech, leavin holes in ya chest, bombin ya like a fuckin math test/
This was my favorite verse from Croz... I like the bombin similie it made a good punchline... Your structure could use some work overall and a little more effort into your punchlines but I think you have serious potential

these dice arent white, cuz snake eyes turn red wen their bouts to strike./
this bitch, is straight fearin tha bite of a sider at night, he be havin daddy checkin tha closet .. makin sure .:VA:. aint occuping tha site.
I liked this closer here - again your structure could use a little help, but your verse flowed alot better than Croz'z and I think your punches were better worked out and you had a lot of metas and similies with some multi-syllable rhymes in there so I liked it more... In this battle Ima have to give the vote to V.A-- Good spit fellas good luck in the future.

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aight its legit. u---p---p---i---n---..................

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aight va u jus hit harder and had a clearer flow but this battle was really close the closest ive eva voted on
v/va

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^^ aight its already at 5.... but uppin this battle, hit it up and ill hit urs up/

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aight.. im wana see votes and links ppl, giv em to me./ legit

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Da won this because of his punches hit harder and had better performance overall. I could read his more easerly because of his structure and flow was spot on and beat the other guy by his rhymes, multies and flow. The other guy did ok but not problebly his best rap, try better next time.

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yo yo yo, i am like tupac cuz of rhymez/
and lyrikaly i can beat-you-up-criminally//
i am a killer and you cant sway me/
because man brendas got a baby// (dope)
can u imagine me being less then the dopest man/~
hell no dawg, cuz im almost as dope as 50 cent man//

keep uppin dis battle, and ill hit up ur battles fo shizzo

DaCROZofHB- weak strucker man you need to seriously work on that man um no really good punches to point out you need to devople those punches man really

val- good punches for like the 3 of them in that whole fucking piece shorten it up man to long gives it to teadus to read man

v/ val

return the favor hit up my links in my sig man

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