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Oreo | 2 | 28.57% | |
Daubs | 5 | 71.43% | |
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10-23-05, 10:41 PM | #46 | |||||||
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vote-OREO
keep up the good work NASTI NATTI STAND UP
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10-23-05, 10:44 PM | #47 | |||||
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IP: 1EDC 673C
uppin............................................. ......................
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10-24-05, 04:17 PM | #48 | |||||
One Mic
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IP: BB77 E4BA
Voted For: Daubs
Daubs took this easily, for havin so much more creativity in his punches. its probably the fact that his verse was longer, but oreo's punches seemed kinda played to me, especially his opener, even though that was an alrite line. both had a decent structure, and both flowed well. Daubs punches made me laugh a bit aswell which is always what you wanna see, especially this bar: Im bad n your dope, na its just that your dope is my bad But oreos punches are red raw.....when he dye's hands LOL! thats fuckin class yer i think Daubs edged this one just slightly for having a more creative verse, although both were decent, and it was pretty close. i did like oreo's structure aswell. no hate......
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10-24-05, 04:19 PM | #49 | ||||
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IP: 71DB 93E1
safe man.
uppin this................................
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10-25-05, 06:59 PM | #50 | |||||||
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IP: CE10 8C0C
Voted For: Daubs
word daubs got this easily oreo- okay your verse was madddddd madd simple yoh...you didnt even seem like you tried.....your vocab was mad simple......your punches either didnt land or barely even scratched daubs.....w/e personals you tried were wack and didnt work.........the only thing you had decent was iight flow sorta and structure...otherwise it sucked... daubs-aiight your verse was dope compared to oreo.......i can tell you least put some effort into it......vocab was good....def had some and oreo didnt........your flow was good fell off not too much but was iffy at times........saw some wordplay......which is good........your punches hit way harder than oreo's and aswell as the nameplay.........it was just a solid drop against oreo's feeble attempt at a verse word v/daubs please rtf with an honest vote in my gfx battle vs chief........ thanks Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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10-25-05, 07:03 PM | #51 | ||||
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IP: 71DB 93E1
thanks,
will do mate.................................
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10-25-05, 07:13 PM | #52 | |||||
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IP: 28A8 B6DC
Voted For: Daubs
Daubs you dropped pretty weak.. but oreo is just to simple...daubs your punches and personals were nice. and oreo.. at least you attempted some punches.. you just need to make em a little more complex.. there boring to read.. and too easy to guess whats next.. your flow was basic to.. you shoulda switched up your rhyme scheme a little bit.. or thrown in a little bit of multi's it got boring and ish.. whereas Daubs's flow kept me reading.. and interested.. and his punches just over powered yours.. thats why i vote daubs.. RTF Apostrophe Vs. Flow Intelligent
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11-11-05, 11:23 PM | #53 | |||||
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IP: 0AD4 728C
umm uppin...who brought this back...who cares...............
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11-12-05, 07:23 AM | #54 | ||||
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IP: F0DD 7D34
prolly willa,
she cant accpet defeat lol. .
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11-13-05, 04:20 PM | #55 | ||||
Middle Weight
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IP: 49FB B804
Voted For: Daubs
oreo the wizard of oz, daubs he tin-man he needs heart put your brain on the road so you can get street smart bad wording, rhymes dont need to be exact (so u coulda ended wit street smartS instead) decent concept couldnt spit flames so the raps he spit cant burn apart daubs couldnt explode on a track if he was dale earnhart bad setup, good punch (rip dale earnhart ) i knock grouppie hoes while you sit back and deal with foes deepest you ever been in the streets was sitting in pot holes nice punch, i aint feelin the whole "u aint gangsta" approach, but u still had good wordplay you walk around wearing more crosses then vampire slayers and love to do more tricks with your "balls" then and 1 players really badly worded, not too good of a punch either on the corner all day and you still a broke joke of a hustler r.v. could rent movies from Daubs, hes a true block buster isnt blockbuster a compliment? i think u were trying to make it a follow-up to ur first line, but it didnt come out very well daubs: ts no suprise he gets slept on, in the business of catering Cos he wont oreop(hurryup) and elevate,we're tired of waiting where'd the caterin line come from? n the oreop thing WAS nameplay, but u need to remember to make the name part of the punch, just sayin his name isnt a diss __________________________________________________ Im bad n your dope, na its just that your dope is my bad But oreos punches are red raw.....when he dye's hands punch is ight, dont like the setup Oreo's unedible....Yeah, Cookies get ate..not blow jobs N he aint bien praised when he steps on the stage & the show stops not too god, needs more of a punch Even if my punches miss, they still explosive...like i landmine but your watch is over your fists...like ya punches are behind time lol u worded it wrong, shoulda been "cuz" instead of "like or suttin like that" Like overdosers,ima leave this wackness destroyed with ease And its only the druggies of RapVerse...that enjoy t'cook-E's your punches are too complicated, n dont hit very hard, wordplay isnt everythin Oreo's all talk,he just wont do it like nike immitations And he blamed record lows on his CD sales on diskriminations lmao, great setup Your fully beat, like playing completed instrumentals But the only thing you spit outa ya mouth is ya dentals another good punch When RV shouts O'shit...there laughin at you not with you And he thought the onlyway to take out dubs..was reducin the volume ok punch, but it doesnt really rhyme When i say he's diss=played,im not talkin about fixin the net And he's longing for the Win....and still hasnt reached a vet not much of a punch, again too much wordplay __________________________________________________ He the only person to crash partys...before they even started And Oreo's aren't clubs......but still his skills have partied (clubs are a biscuit too) not a good closer, setup wasnt really a punch [b]overall neither verse was great, but daubs stayed fairly consistent (no horrible lines) in a long verse, and oreo didnt stay consistent in a short verse oreo had the best punches, but his verse really fell apart at the end v/daubs |
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