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Oreo 2 28.57%
Daubs 5 71.43%
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Old 10-23-05, 10:41 PM   #46
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vote-OREO

keep up the good work

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Old 10-23-05, 10:44 PM   #47
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Old 10-24-05, 04:17 PM   #48
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Voted For: Daubs

Daubs took this easily, for havin so much more creativity in his punches. its probably the fact that his verse was longer, but oreo's punches seemed kinda played to me, especially his opener, even though that was an alrite line. both had a decent structure, and both flowed well. Daubs punches made me laugh a bit aswell which is always what you wanna see, especially this bar:
Im bad n your dope, na its just that your dope is my bad
But oreos punches are red raw.....when he dye's hands
LOL! thats fuckin class

yer i think Daubs edged this one just slightly for having a more creative verse, although both were decent, and it was pretty close. i did like oreo's structure aswell. no hate......
 
Old 10-24-05, 04:19 PM   #49
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safe man.

uppin this................................
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Old 10-25-05, 06:59 PM   #50
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Voted For: Daubs

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daubs got this easily

oreo- okay your verse was madddddd madd simple yoh...you didnt even seem like you tried.....your vocab was mad simple......your punches either didnt land or barely even scratched daubs.....w/e personals you tried were wack and didnt work.........the only thing you had decent was iight flow sorta and structure...otherwise it sucked...

daubs-aiight your verse was dope compared to oreo.......i can tell you least put some effort into it......vocab was good....def had some and oreo didnt........your flow was good fell off not too much but was iffy at times........saw some wordplay......which is good........your punches hit way harder than oreo's and aswell as the nameplay.........it was just a solid drop against oreo's feeble attempt at a verse

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Old 10-25-05, 07:03 PM   #51
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thanks,

will do mate.................................
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Old 10-25-05, 07:13 PM   #52
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Daubs you dropped pretty weak.. but oreo is just to simple...daubs your punches and personals were nice. and oreo.. at least you attempted some punches.. you just need to make em a little more complex.. there boring to read.. and too easy to guess whats next.. your flow was basic to.. you shoulda switched up your rhyme scheme a little bit.. or thrown in a little bit of multi's it got boring and ish.. whereas Daubs's flow kept me reading.. and interested.. and his punches just over powered yours.. thats why i vote daubs..


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umm uppin...who brought this back...who cares...............
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Old 11-12-05, 07:23 AM   #54
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prolly willa,

she cant accpet defeat lol.

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Old 11-13-05, 04:20 PM   #55
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oreo the wizard of oz, daubs he tin-man he needs heart
put your brain on the road so you can get street smart
bad wording, rhymes dont need to be exact (so u coulda ended wit street smartS instead) decent concept
couldnt spit flames so the raps he spit cant burn apart
daubs couldnt explode on a track if he was dale earnhart
bad setup, good punch (rip dale earnhart )
i knock grouppie hoes while you sit back and deal with foes
deepest you ever been in the streets was sitting in pot holes
nice punch, i aint feelin the whole "u aint gangsta" approach, but u still had good wordplay
you walk around wearing more crosses then vampire slayers
and love to do more tricks with your "balls" then and 1 players
really badly worded, not too good of a punch either
on the corner all day and you still a broke joke of a hustler
r.v. could rent movies from Daubs, hes a true block buster
isnt blockbuster a compliment? i think u were trying to make it a follow-up to ur first line, but it didnt come out very well


daubs:
ts no suprise he gets slept on, in the business of catering
Cos he wont oreop(hurryup) and elevate,we're tired of waiting
where'd the caterin line come from?
n the oreop thing WAS nameplay, but u need to remember to make the name part of the punch, just sayin his name isnt a diss

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Im bad n your dope, na its just that your dope is my bad
But oreos punches are red raw.....when he dye's hands
punch is ight, dont like the setup
Oreo's unedible....Yeah, Cookies get ate..not blow jobs
N he aint bien praised when he steps on the stage & the show stops
not too god, needs more of a punch
Even if my punches miss, they still explosive...like i landmine
but your watch is over your fists...like ya punches are behind time
lol u worded it wrong, shoulda been "cuz" instead of "like or suttin like that"
Like overdosers,ima leave this wackness destroyed with ease
And its only the druggies of RapVerse...that enjoy t'cook-E's
your punches are too complicated, n dont hit very hard, wordplay isnt everythin
Oreo's all talk,he just wont do it like nike immitations
And he blamed record lows on his CD sales on diskriminations
lmao, great setup
Your fully beat, like playing completed instrumentals
But the only thing you spit outa ya mouth is ya dentals
another good punch
When RV shouts O'shit...there laughin at you not with you
And he thought the onlyway to take out dubs..was reducin the volume
ok punch, but it doesnt really rhyme
When i say he's diss=played,im not talkin about fixin the net
And he's longing for the Win....and still hasnt reached a vet
not much of a punch, again too much wordplay
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And Oreo's aren't clubs......but still his skills have partied (clubs are a biscuit too)
not a good closer, setup wasnt really a punch

[b]overall
neither verse was great, but daubs stayed fairly consistent (no horrible lines) in a long verse, and oreo didnt stay consistent in a short verse
oreo had the best punches, but his verse really fell apart at the end

v/daubs
 
 


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