Battle Rules:

12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate Votes

First to 5. Or 3-0 K.O.

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Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 10-25-05 at 10:53 AM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.


Win by 3-0 KO

Flow Intelligent has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-24-05 08:09 PM.

Aiight Check It...


Wack verses with stupid punchlines have no chances of stopping me
This a dog fight, so ill put a paws to you like an apostrophe*
Fire shots from the pistol, rapid hits to the body will gut ya
Faggot, I'll work your mid-section like a Pilates instructor
So dont post a verse man, Or you'll get stuck like a sticker
When you rap you get booze and i aint talking about liqour
Ya skills are ok at most and its funny that ya think ya posting realness
But if ya verses were really dope i'd have to overdose to feel it
My bars are similar to S.A.T's.... You're too stupid to test one
Like having sex with the grim reaper... You're fucking with death son
My verses claim life, So now you're trying to feign death
I made my words 'play-right' so I'll have you exit 'stage-left'**


*= Paws=Pause..
**=Playright/Playwrite, Stageleft are theater terms.

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RV's Only 3 Time Topical Tourney Champion

Apostrophe has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-24-05 09:15 PM.

Dude Your Talents Gone.. Sorry To Say.. Your A Wreck..
&& yea you were the only 3 time topical champ..
......................................but dawg this is text..
Back In The Day You Could've Beaten Me... But I Know this is True..
When i started riding a bike.. i still hadnt fallen off as much as you..
Been Here Long Enough.. But somehow.. Your just a ho..
That after 2 years.. hasnt shown improvement.
.........................................like re-runs of time allens show..
My Punches Are Frightening.. After This Here Comes The Terror..
Dude Shares A 1 bedroom Apartment W/Bill Buckner..
...............................Proves he's got no room for error
Your Rhymes Are Cold Dun.. You've Been Told Son..
Your Jobs are like your win streaks.. you cant hold one
Apostrophe's On Top.. So Dude Just Stop The Hating..
&& I got Flow On Lock...................
But I'll Make Him Open Up After All These Combinations

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My Lines Are ILL yo

Voted For: Apostrophe

Wack verses with stupid punchlines have no chances of stopping me
This a dog fight, so ill put a paws to you like an apostrophe*
My bars are similar to S.A.T's.... You're too stupid to test one
Like having sex with the grim reaper... You're fucking with death son
My verses claim life, So now you're trying to feign death
I made my words 'play-right' so I'll have you exit 'stage-left'**

(Opener personal was sick, and those ^ were all decent, but you came played on too many bars...i mean a boo's/booze flip and a dope/overdose line, that shit killed it.)


VS

Dude Your Talents Gone.. Sorry To Say.. Your A Wreck..
&& yea you were the only 3 time topical champ..
......................................but dawg this is text..
Back In The Day You Could've Beaten Me... But I Know this is True..
When i started riding a bike.. i still hadnt fallen off as much as you..
My Punches Are Frightening.. After This Here Comes The Terror..
Dude Shares A 1 bedroom Apartment W/Bill Buckner..
...............................Proves he's got no room for error
Your Rhymes Are Cold Dun.. You've Been Told Son..
Your Jobs are like your win streaks.. you cant hold one
Apostrophe's On Top.. So Dude Just Stop The Hating..
&& I got Flow On Lock...................
But I'll Make Him Open Up After All These Combinations

(Fresh heavy verse here, lots of originality opener personal was sick)

Apo got this for more consistant punches and not coming played.

NO HATE

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Voted For: Apostrophe

Flow Intelligent

Wack verses with stupid punchlines have no chances of stopping me
This a dog fight, so ill put a paws to you like an apostrophe*
^nice name play in opener, feeling the overall bar 9/10

Fire shots from the pistol, rapid hits to the body will gut ya
Faggot, I'll work your mid-section like a Pilates instructor
^no real punch actually, more self-glorification 4/10

So dont post a verse man, Or you'll get stuck like a sticker
When you rap you get booze and i aint talking about liqour
^good wordplay in here, formed into punch, solid 7/10

Ya skills are ok at most and its funny that ya think ya posting realness
But if ya verses were really dope i'd have to overdose to feel it
^hmmmm not feeling it actually, no real hardhitting punch 5/10

My bars are similar to S.A.T's.... You're too stupid to test one
Like having sex with the grim reaper... You're fucking with death son
^hehe, liked this bar, good wordplay, hardhittin shit 8/10

My verses claim life, So now you're trying to feign death
I made my words 'play-right' so I'll have you exit 'stage-left'**
^good closer but not as hardhitting as bar above this one 6/10

Total: 39/60 = 65%

Apostrophe

Dude Your Talents Gone.. Sorry To Say.. Your A Wreck..
&& yea you were the only 3 time topical champ..
......................................but dawg this is text..
^good opener, bringing em down in a subtle way 8/10

Back In The Day You Could've Beaten Me... But I Know this is True..
When i started riding a bike.. i still hadnt fallen off as much as you..
^lmao...i actually chuckled at this one...funny 8/10

Been Here Long Enough.. But somehow.. Your just a ho..
That after 2 years.. hasnt shown improvement.
.........................................like re-runs of time allens show..
^again funny, nice comparison, pretty hardhitting 7/10

My Punches Are Frightening.. After This Here Comes The Terror..
Dude Shares A 1 bedroom Apartment W/Bill Buckner..
...............................Proves he's got no room for error
^liking this bar, finished em off nicely...7/10

Your Rhymes Are Cold Dun.. You've Been Told Son..
Your Jobs are like your win streaks.. you cant hold one
^lmao, chuckled with last line...funny shit 7/10

Apostrophe's On Top.. So Dude Just Stop The Hating..
&& I got Flow On Lock...................
But I'll Make Him Open Up After All These Combinations
^not really feelin closer in fact 4/10

Total: 41/60 = 68%

Close battle but I feel Apostrophe edged it out a bit more...

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