Battle Rules:

12-16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No d/r
No HATE

This a multi battle...so vote based on multis only.Not on punches or w/e.

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 09-26-05 at 06:28 PM

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Win by forfeit

One Man Band has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-23-05 06:31 PM.

Natural killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-23-05 06:36 PM.

battling you is empty, like playin with text be
the pain is intense see.. my brain is entrenched deep,
into thoughts of makin moves to get the fuck outta this life
the sounds that I write got emotion blurrin my sight
all this anger n' pain got me hurtin the mic
i ain't gonna let 'em fall til all a my dreams is true
put the kid over some hot beats n' poof...
you got magical music that'll heat the booth
the flow is evidence, the rhyme schemes is proof
the content is ill, the talk is real... competition I kill
watch ya spot, i'm in a position to fill any position or skill
so called sick emcees got nothin on my medicinal flows
throwin up fingers n' bows.. god bless the mic n' tickle ya nose
Leavin this kid rocked, when I take advantage of rules
its a multi battle, punches dont have to be attackin at you
I could just talk like a babblin fool, in one line ill have as much yappin as you would normally have in a few, and practically use as much of this battle threads room as I want, slappin a broom, magical tomb, laughing at shrooms, immaculate dude, passin the duece, blah blah faggot thats blue, cracking a shoe into a pile of traffic and goo until a bitch with a towel rack attached to her boobs passes and screws a million zoos, koo koo kachu.

^line 16 was actually one line, im just real noob so its a little bit stretched.

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c'mon.......vote you lazy bitches.................

aah.......uppin this shit........................

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lmao... not a single vote -_- .

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Voted For: Natural killa

Pretty good battle....

battling you is empty, like playin with text be
the pain is intense see.. my brain is entrenched deep,
8/10 - solid opener
into thoughts of makin moves to get the fuck outta this life
the sounds that I write got emotion blurrin my sight
6/10 - very lacking in sense making. The sounds that i write got emotion blurrin my sight? Doesn't have a connection between your music and how it got your emotion blurring your sight
all this anger n' pain got me hurtin the mic
i ain't gonna let 'em fall til all a my dreams is true
put the kid over some hot beats n' poof...
you got magical music that'll heat the booth
8/10 good line, like the connection between magic and the usage of "heat"
the flow is evidence, the rhyme schemes is proof
the content is ill, the talk is real... competition I kill
watch ya spot, i'm in a position to fill any position or skill
7/10 - a lot of self glorification....but would have been better if you fix the second line
so called sick emcees got nothin on my medicinal flows
throwin up fingers n' bows.. god bless the mic n' tickle ya nose
7/10 - another average bar. The first line was real simple. I kinda expected you to say medicine when you spoke of sick mcs
Leavin this kid rocked, when I take advantage of rules
its a multi battle, punches dont have to be attackin at you
7/10 - average bar again. Seems that you tried to sneak a punch in, lol

I could just talk like a babblin fool, in one line ill have as much yappin as you would normally have in a few, and practically use as much of this battle threads room as I want, slappin a broom, magical tomb, laughing at shrooms, immaculate dude, passin the duece, blah blah faggot thats blue, cracking a shoe into a pile of traffic and goo until a bitch with a towel rack attached to her boobs passes and screws a million zoos, koo koo kachu.
Ending - 7/10 - Seems that you were trying to find more words to rhyme than concentrating on using metas to get your point across

murdering with keystyles 'n freestyles..while never unheard,the cypher tactic
like infants chewin on candy,poison concealed..so obsured 'n hyper active
9/10 - Very good multi use.........Great opener
cant's say u got riders 'n lactic...cuz u get no milking from prostitudes
just erections,no bust..and direction of dust's where u tilting 'n lost-in-flutes
8/10 - nothing I can really say wrong about this....
a pussy standing still with the Boston roots...only retreating from beef
can't call this a battle unless reffering to when he's beating his meat
7/10 - Umm.....punches maybe....lol. decent line.
kick him 'n sink in his front teeth...& make 'em swallow their plaque
ur turn,u behind shook...i'll burn ya rhyme book..ur raps hollow 'n whack
7/10 - Average line. You started off great, but i dont like the ending. Should have connected more to "burning" then whack, feel me..
all's you do is follow the pack....shit...a kissin ass 'n dickridin galore
beatin urself 'n seekin some help cuz ur moms up in a cast,a bitch hidin in court
7/10 - Personal......another average line. First line wasnt effective.
fighting's the thought...but ur pissing ur pants from the nightmare
lunchin in the can and u never punching a man..cuz tampons might tear
8/10 - Good connection to the previous line. Good Multi...
can's run from here...the love taps considered ur great manuever
grab hold of ya breast 'n demote-it..cuz i'm homophobic so i'd never hate to bruise-ya
& to win?nobody'd choose-ya....for real...ur shit's cold 'n hated,a ban-for-sure
they all came to bet but u staying so wet..ur just an overrated amatuer
6/10 - First bar was your worst out of the rest.

Total
OMB - 50
NK - 54

I vote NK, good battle guys. OMB, needed more connection and more usage of metas. NK, your problem is the total opposite. It seemed that you had more punches than metas, but was able to rebound by using them in the punches.

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Grim

wow, i'm surprised that i'm the first to vote............

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