Checkin In ...................Im doin 8-10 lines....................You can do wateva

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I'll ether drop first and you match or you drop first and I match. g' luck, our last battle was wak, this time Im gonna try a bit more coz its the league. 1

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I'll spill em' an Oz. at a time till you think the bottles bleeding
Shiiet, I merked this kid so bad . . .
. . . HBO Denied the 6th season
This kids sleeping, I'll wake em up so they can lay em down
The only way Id see em drop fourty . . .
. . . would be when I put em' fourty feet benieth the ground
Dawg... you have no talent, you not even a hassle
I'll be honest, Im more worried about whats on TV . . .
. . . Then how you'll drop in this battle
So you can put your hands down, aint no point robing the poor
I'll put your yearly income in reverse . . .
. . . just to put you in a figuere four
you aint sick anymore, you take proteine to the face
Unless you gotta bat... then you aint never seen the 1st base

G' luck man.

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Man You From The Place of Fresh Lameville Assholes You aint nuttin but a bitch
He like tupac he got ambitions as a rida But Wordz was Talkin bout Dicks
Like Ludacris I hold the number one spot and wordz from God cant handle this
if He come at me Ill have him hard to breathe like he was hangin with Faboulus
I Know you tired of my lyrics man but jus face the fact you cant hold me
he mad bcuz my punchez made his song cry More than Jay Z
you need emphasis on ya verse bcuz otherwise yo punch get overlooked
Then he jus burst in rage when I win like a soda thats been overshook
I like to smack wordz so thats why my wordz stay true
Dont be jealous Jus Bcuz I Got Shitz in my toilet that drop better than you


Finish

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str8 drop fam. good luck man. 1

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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...419#post2815419
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2815428

I'll edit the rest in when I see more people have battled

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---Wordz Ahgod--

I'll spill em' an Oz. at a time till you think the bottles bleeding
Shiiet, I merked this kid so bad . . .
. . . HBO Denied the 6th season
>>Okay opener.

This kids sleeping, I'll wake em up so they can lay em down
The only way Id see em drop fourty . . .
. . . would be when I put em' fourty feet benieth the ground
>>Horrible wording but okay punch.

Dawg... you have no talent, you not even a hassle
I'll be honest, Im more worried about whats on TV . . .
. . . Then how you'll drop in this battle
>>Far too stretched out and kind of boring concept.

So you can put your hands down, aint no point robing the poor
I'll put your yearly income in reverse . . .
. . . just to put you in a figuere four
>>Flow is off but okay.

you aint sick anymore, you take proteine to the face
Unless you gotta bat... then you aint never seen the 1st base
>>No, not really liking.



--Oz.--

Man You From The Place of Fresh Lameville Assholes You aint nuttin but a bitch
He like tupac he got ambitions as a rida But Wordz was Talkin bout Dicks
>>Bad concept, bad delivery.

Like Ludacris I hold the number one spot and wordz from God cant handle this
if He come at me Ill have him hard to breathe like he was hangin with Faboulus
>>I've seen this concept put a lot better before. Weak hit.

I Know you tired of my lyrics man but jus face the fact you cant hold me
he mad bcuz my punchez made his song cry More than Jay Z
>>Your punches make his song cry? No..

you need emphasis on ya verse bcuz otherwise yo punch get overlooked
Then he jus burst in rage when I win like a soda thats been overshook
>>Soda that's "overshook" wins? No... not even a good attempt.

I like to smack wordz so thats why my wordz stay true
Dont be jealous Jus Bcuz I Got Shitz in my toilet that drop better than you
>>Very played.



Vote:

Wordz Ahgod





This was not a very good battle. Wordz had the opener which pretty much won it. Oz. didn't really come with anything.

thanks for the vote and feed dawg. I'll rtf on your battle and add to my links man. 1

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wordz:
I'll spill em' an Oz. at a time till you think the bottles bleeding
Shiiet, I merked this kid so bad . . .
. . . HBO Denied the 6th season
^^^i used a hbo punch againts him..but decent opener
This kids sleeping, I'll wake em up so they can lay em down
The only way Id see em drop fourty . . .
. . . would be when I put em' fourty feet benieth the ground
^^uhhh nothin special here
Dawg... you have no talent, you not even a hassle
I'll be honest, Im more worried about whats on TV . . .
. . . Then how you'll drop in this battle
^^ok..nothin hard hittin
So you can put your hands down, aint no point robing the poor
I'll put your yearly income in reverse . . .
. . . just to put you in a figuere four
^^nah
you aint sick anymore, you take proteine to the face
Unless you gotta bat... then you aint never seen the 1st base
^^^badd closer....

words pleez stop stretchin ya bars dogg there 2 wordy...decent drop tho

oz:
Man You From The Place of Fresh Lameville Assholes You aint nuttin but a bitch
He like tupac he got ambitions as a rida But Wordz was Talkin bout Dicks
^^^ok i guess
Like Ludacris I hold the number one spot and wordz from God cant handle this
if He come at me Ill have him hard to breathe like he was hangin with Faboulus
^^^dis was terrible
I Know you tired of my lyrics man but jus face the fact you cant hold me
he mad bcuz my punchez made his song cry More than Jay Z
^^^oh no lol
you need emphasis on ya verse bcuz otherwise yo punch get overlooked
Then he jus burst in rage when I win like a soda thats been overshook
^^^decent
I like to smack wordz so thats why my wordz stay true
Dont be jealous Jus Bcuz I Got Shitz in my toilet that drop better than you
^^^nah




v/words......kind of easily

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^^he's scared.lol

thanks, my lines ARE a bit stretch but I like the way it sounds when I read it. Its a style I develop'd why in the LBL cypher. but I'll work on it man. 1

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Wordz Ahgod:

I'll spill em' an Oz. at a time till you think the bottles bleeding
Shiiet, I merked this kid so bad . . .
. . . HBO Denied the 6th season
^^ok opener, coulda been worded better
This kids sleeping, I'll wake em up so they can lay em down
The only way Id see em drop fourty . . .
. . . would be when I put em' fourty feet benieth the ground
^^elementary troop
Dawg... you have no talent, you not even a hassle
I'll be honest, Im more worried about whats on TV . . .
. . . Then how you'll drop in this battle
^^no
So you can put your hands down, aint no point robing the poor
I'll put your yearly income in reverse . . .
. . . just to put you in a figuere four
^^ehh
you aint sick anymore, you take proteine to the face
Unless you gotta bat... then you aint never seen the 1st base
^^blah


Oz.:

Man You From The Place of Fresh Lameville Assholes You aint nuttin but a bitch
He like tupac he got ambitions as a rida But Wordz was Talkin bout Dicks
^^no
Like Ludacris I hold the number one spot and wordz from God cant handle this
if He come at me Ill have him hard to breathe like he was hangin with Faboulus
^^ok bar played concept... breath/fabolous
I Know you tired of my lyrics man but jus face the fact you cant hold me
he mad bcuz my punchez made his song cry More than Jay Z
^^no
you need emphasis on ya verse bcuz otherwise yo punch get overlooked
Then he jus burst in rage when I win like a soda thats been overshook
^^no
I like to smack wordz so thats why my wordz stay true
Dont be jealous Jus Bcuz I Got Shitz in my toilet that drop better than you
^^stupid


Once again basic verses nothing impressing... gotta give it to Wordz for more consistency


V// Wordz Ahgod

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Wordz-

I dunno if this styles in now days or whatever, but eh....



I'll spill em' an Oz. at a time till you think the bottles bleeding
Shiiet, I merked this kid so bad . . .
. . . HBO Denied the 6th season
-worded bad, decent nameplay.
This kids sleeping, I'll wake em up so they can lay em down
The only way Id see em drop fourty . . .
. . . would be when I put em' fourty feet benieth the ground
-that'd be ok if you yourself dropped fourty, you hoewever dropped, i cant even tell like 8
Dawg... you have no talent, you not even a hassle
I'll be honest, Im more worried about whats on TV . . .
. . . Then how you'll drop in this battle
-heh decent filler
So you can put your hands down, aint no point robing the poor
I'll put your yearly income in reverse . . .
. . . just to put you in a figuere four
-pretty nice
you aint sick anymore, you take proteine to the face
Unless you gotta bat... then you aint never seen the 1st base
-bad setup, decent line.


Oz-

Man You From The Place of Fresh Lameville Assholes You aint nuttin but a bitch
He like tupac he got ambitions as a rida But Wordz was Talkin bout Dicks
-lol nice
Like Ludacris I hold the number one spot and wordz from God cant handle this
if He come at me Ill have him hard to breathe like he was hangin with Faboulus
-maybe if breathe was a newer song but, no.
I Know you tired of my lyrics man but jus face the fact you cant hold me
he mad bcuz my punchez made his song cry More than Jay Z
-eh
you need emphasis on ya verse bcuz otherwise yo punch get overlooked
Then he jus burst in rage when I win like a soda thats been overshook
-lol seriously?
I like to smack wordz so thats why my wordz stay true
Dont be jealous Jus Bcuz I Got Shitz in my toilet that drop better than you
-heh


v/ Oz


ehhhhhhhhhh

1-3 Wordz is up ....Uppin.....................
ill edit my post on sat when i have time

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