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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
02-02-07, 12:12 PM
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IP:
It wasn't bad, a little weak. but can only be improved. Just go back and re write each line to make it flow more? But it seems as if it had no meaning and was rushed through just to rhyme words at the end of each sentence.
but keep it up man.
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