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01-11-05, 01:24 PM | #16 | ||||
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IP: C3B8 0828
That was a real deep piece yo! I liked the hook too. Theres a few spots here and there that need a lil work, but really its iight i wouldn't change it. drop some more shit yo, i like readin it!!
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01-11-05, 04:22 PM | #17 | ||||
~Lyrical Nirvana~
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IP: 28AD 5545
thank...u...................uppin for more feedback............
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01-12-05, 04:47 AM | #18 | ||||
~Lyrical Nirvana~
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IP: 3240 794D
ups..........................................
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01-12-05, 06:11 AM | #19 | |||||
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IP: 42E8 5523
im loving this man, just spat out the verses to Cold As Ice instrumental, sounds ace mate. liking the rythim but i think ur choruses need some work, fat rhyme though mate, just trying to stick to feedback rules :P
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01-16-05, 04:04 PM | #20 | |||||
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IP: 5043 32F4
pretty good drop liked your stucture and your hook was good...but try to use more vocab to give all that emotion you used flavour...you know i hope you do..lol...but this was a good drop....i wouldnt mind a collab about something emotioanl with you...it would be good you should pm me or hit me on aim or msn w/e you got or shit w/e....but good drop i really like dyour flow and multis a few bad lines but i liked most of them...good job..
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01-17-05, 05:14 AM | #21 | ||||
~Lyrical Nirvana~
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IP: 28AD 5545
ups............................................... .................
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01-23-05, 02:34 PM | #22 | ||||
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ups yall......and thanks for all the feedback..................
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03-10-05, 04:50 AM | #23 | ||||
~Lyrical Nirvana~
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IP: 28AD 5545
uppin.........bringing back my old shit
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