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09-17-06, 01:12 PM | #1 | ||||
The Saviour
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7. Aeral (4-0) vs 8. Untold (7-4)
IP: C75F FB8F
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09-19-06, 06:17 PM | #2 | ||||
Met-A-4
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IP: 0825 899A
YEAH!
whut up?
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09-20-06, 11:09 AM | #3 | ||||
Light Weight
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IP: A3A2 4302
again?
lmao. let's go 12 or something. if i dont drop links then hit me up next week and i'll double up on them. Last edited by Aeral : 09-20-06 at 03:36 PM. |
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09-20-06, 11:58 AM | #4 | ||||
Light Weight
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IP: A3A2 4302
fuck that crack music you speak of, everyone knows that this weaks wack,
& Untold don't know Jack.... he's just the dude that killed you few weeks back You claim you're gonna win this and that you got a bright career, bitch, I'd tell u to cool your jets.... but they ain't been to the super bowl in years you fucking suck bitch, you can't fight so when this is over your dead, I'll Pull ya roots so hard it'll grow a fucking garden on the top of your head Why so shy kid? i mean tighten up and quit acting so shallow, you ain't ever cross the line.... that's your opponents job in a battle. I'm violent with spits bitch, document the day you're bound to go down.. A Log isn't just what you use for a diary... ...it's what I'm using to fucking knock your head to the ground You're a faggot and a wack.. i mean damn this square's got stages, I'd give you a Pat on the back for that... but he's been fucking you there for ages |
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09-22-06, 01:47 AM | #5 | ||||
Met-A-4
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
ok.. sorry for the late shit.
btw, lampejo can't vote on this battle cause hes a faggot. i'm fresh head to toe, but i can tell ya poor 'n this dudes a hoe but i'll make sure that discount.. like how u afford most of ya food 'n clothes were both LLL material, cept were not even my friend cuz ur verses show ur level of talent.. by gettin beaten by him leavin ya sore cuz, u could never beat me in sports bra i'll make A-t-L's.. off, like i beat him in a round of golf in georgia 'n i know i'm usin most of the same verse i dropped, but i'll still intringue cuz u doubled ur chances of losin.. droppin the same wack verse in this league think u'll be rich? how? especially after i dismember ur rib but we'll watch the gold rush.. down ya leg when i enter ur crib ur a sloppy fag, 'n ur all ur cheap talkins got me mad so i'll zip ur mouth shut.. like the police'll do to ur body- bag
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09-22-06, 01:49 PM | #6 | ||||
Met-A-4
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IP: 0825 899A
upz.
we both dropped.
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09-23-06, 12:45 AM | #7 | ||||
Met-A-4
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IP: 0825 899A
uh.. wtf?
up again.
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09-23-06, 12:51 AM | #8 | |||
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IP: 1C0F 1C11
fuck that crack music you speak of, everyone knows that this weaks wack,
& Untold don't know Jack.... he's just the dude that killed you few weeks back You're a faggot and a wack.. i mean damn this square's got stages, I'd give you a Pat on the back for that... but he's been fucking you there for ages vs. i'm fresh head to toe, but i can tell ya poor 'n this dudes a hoe but i'll make sure that discount.. like how u afford most of ya food 'n clothes were both LLL material, cept were not even my friend cuz ur verses show ur level of talent.. by gettin beaten by him This was very close i thought aeral had a couple lines that could have been quotables but he didnt excute it properly and the wording was off so with that i have to give it to untold for a more well rounded verse. v/untold
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5x PS HOF 2004 Poet of the year 3X writer of the month Last edited by Lampejo. : 09-23-06 at 12:23 PM. |
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09-23-06, 02:26 AM | #9 | ||||
The Saviour
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IP: C75F FB8F
Up over no-shows.
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09-23-06, 08:30 AM | #10 | |||||
Mic Jordan
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IP: 469C D737
fuck that crack music you speak of, everyone knows that this weaks wack,
& Untold don't know Jack.... he's just the dude that killed you few weeks back You're a faggot and a wack.. i mean damn this square's got stages, I'd give you a Pat on the back for that... but he's been fucking you there for ages vs. i'm fresh head to toe, but i can tell ya poor 'n this dudes a hoe but i'll make sure that discount.. like how u afford most of ya food 'n clothes were both LLL material, cept were not even my friend cuz ur verses show ur level of talent.. by gettin beaten by him This was a close battle, but I would have to give it to Untold, his set ups were better and his unqoutables were better than Aeral's close battle thought still could go either way. Vote - Untold
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09-23-06, 01:21 PM | #11 | |||
Middle Weight
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IP: C83E 40A4
You claim you're gonna win this and that you got a bright career,
bitch, I'd tell u to cool your jets.... but they ain't been to the super bowl in years You're a faggot and a wack.. i mean damn this square's got stages, I'd give you a Pat on the back for that... but he's been fucking you there for ages vs. were both LLL material, cept were not even my friend cuz ur verses show ur level of talent.. by gettin beaten by him vote - Aeral.
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09-23-06, 07:28 PM | #12 | |||||||
the medicine man
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IP: 2FB2 BF34
i'm fresh head to toe, but i can tell ya poor 'n this dudes a hoe
but i'll make sure that discount.. like how u afford most of ya food 'n clothes were both LLL material, cept were not even my friend cuz ur verses show ur level of talent.. by gettin beaten by him VS Why so shy kid? i mean tighten up and quit acting so shallow, you ain't ever cross the line.... that's your opponents job in a battle. I'm violent with spits bitch, document the day you're bound to go down.. A Log isn't just what you use for a diary... ...it's what I'm using to fucking knock your head to the ground THIS BATTLE WAS CLOSE I THOUGHT UNTOLD WOULD NO SHOW HE CAME PRETTY GOOD, SO DID AERAL I ENJOYED UN'S VERSE A BIT MORE THOUGH V/ UNTOLD V/ UNTOLD |
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09-23-06, 08:41 PM | #13 | ||||
Fuck Parents
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IP: 9F68 FE4B
You're a faggot and a wack.. i mean damn this square's got stages,
I'd give you a Pat on the back for that... but he's been fucking you there for ages not quoting this but ummm.....who's pat? lol just a random name u chose to use??? well anyway.... fuck that crack music you speak of, everyone knows that this weaks wack, & Untold don't know Jack.... he's just the dude that killed you few weeks back You claim you're gonna win this and that you got a bright career, bitch, I'd tell u to cool your jets.... but they ain't been to the super bowl in years vs i'm fresh head to toe, but i can tell ya poor 'n this dudes a hoe but i'll make sure that discount.. like how u afford most of ya food 'n clothes seems like aeral's 1st 2 bars were dope then he just fell off. untold, the talent line i've seen before so it wasnt very effective to me. wasnt really feelin much else of ya verse either. v/ aeral
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09-23-06, 09:49 PM | #14 | |||
I Hurt.
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IP: 2AC9 5FB1
I'm violent with spits bitch, document the day you're bound to go down..
A Log isn't just what you use for a diary... ...it's what I'm using to fucking knock your head to the ground vs. leavin ya sore cuz, u could never beat me in sports bra i'll make A-t-L's.. off, like i beat him in a round of golf in georgia This was really close. These verses weren't really that bad, just both only had 1 line I thought was quotable. Aeral just had a lot of lines that coulda been good, but just for some reason didn't work to me. The Jack line, I used a Jack line also this week and a better one. Pat on the back I used a long time ago, but Pat, I flipped it as a sex with Tom Brady line, Jet line coulda been good but was worded off.. log line was kinda funny tho, lol, I liked that. From Untold, ATL line was hot, I liked that. Talent line was good but I feel like I've seen that exact line before about Twizted. Discount line i seen a few times before so that didn't do much to me. Double chance of losing, that coulda applied to you too, doesn't really work. The last two bars ya had were pretty weak and with a stronger two bars I'd have a much easier time givin' ya this. After reading this a few times, I think I'm giving this to Untold. Both verses had a lotta ideas that weren't like "real" played, but I've seen before. What it came down to me was the way the concepts were executed and I felt Untold did better with that so he gets this. Vote - Untold |
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09-23-06, 10:46 PM | #15 | ||||||
Light Weight
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IP: 92DE DBB1
Aeral -Why so shy kid? i mean tighten up and quit acting so shallow,
you ain't ever cross the line.... that's your opponents job in a battle. I'm violent with spits bitch, document the day you're bound to go down.. A Log isn't just what you use for a diary... ...it's what I'm using to fucking knock your head to the ground Untold-ur a sloppy fag, 'n ur all ur cheap talkins got me mad so i'll zip ur mouth shut.. like the police'll do to ur body- bag Ehh str8 battle Aeral had some pretty nice lines Untold didnt really do it for me hes usually nicer that that Vote- Aeral |
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