http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=241538
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=241509
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Just a collab..........tell me what yall think.......

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=5241057
^^ Click Hi Fi or Lo Fi

'preciate any feedback.......

pz

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1st verse- shit was kool, flow was on for da most part, sounded lil off for a quick second near dat intellectual line, but wasn't too bad....lyrics were str8, emotion was kool,str8 verse..

2nd verse- comes in nice, good vibe on dis ish, good flow, lyrics, all dat shit was kool on dis verse...

3rd verse- again, kool shit,guy's riding the beat nicely n lyrics r str8..good stuff...

quality on da track is dope, u each had a dif. vibe to bring to da track, good mixture guy, good stuff each of you...

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alright im listenin, beats kinda slow at the start and through out actually, It has a nice bass though, its decent. your flow is pretty good, pretty confortable for the most parts. lyrics is def lyrical but it kinda fucks the flow a little bit. your delivery is decent, could be better, but the emotion is good. 2nd cat kinda reminds me of a softer voice of Kontroverzey, but not bad. he switches his flow up pretty coo, lyrics is weak. delivery is pretty hot though. the emotion is good too. 3rd cat is pretty tight, lyrics is dope and the flow is smooth, kinda slow flow but it works. emotion seems low as well as the delivery. overal not bad track yall

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...090#post3161090

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man...where is that sample from ???

this beats monster......might havta jack it from ya HAHAHAH

1st dude...

quality not bad.....voks r to loud IMOflows on...delevery could be upp'd some...u got a lot beter

2nd....

quality is iight.....swagger is their, delevery is good....dubs is off a tad....lyrics an't bad..nuthin stood out

3rd dude....

quality crisp...dudes flow is smooth, feelin it....kinda feel off a half a sec their, but kept it smooth....like the black man line..how he worded it was nice.....dudes a writer man...nice w the words....felt this dude the most

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HELLLZ YEEAHH !!!!

'preciate da feedback...................all feedback has been returned...

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lol beat is gay reminds me of that old show that has Herman Munster i think it was called The Munsters.... ur flow is ight u have a lisp lyrics is decent ight drop....next dude is okay...his flow is better.....delievery is ight........next dude....hes flow is the best on the track ....flow is smooth delievery is ok...overall this was decent keep doin ur thang....rtf on its real shit

.............................'preciate da feedback..............

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alright...beat? honestly sounds like some really funny stuff. i could see a silent movie to this beat

verse 1 - flow in the beginnng reminds me of DMX's "Who We Be"...some lines seem a little stretched. do you have a lisp? quality is cool..lyrically it works. nothing special

verse 2 - rhyme scheme is a little odd but its cool so it works..i like how he says hungry..hahaha. so whats the whole concept of this song? i like his energy toward the end of the song.

verse 3 - im lost as to what this song is about..flow is cool..energy really fell off on this verse..quality went down with this verse...i really think this is the worst verse of all 3


overall quality was pretty good throughout..not sure what the topic was because things were kinda just gettin thrown in here and there...not something i would personally listen to..but it wasnt bad at all....