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Old 04-06-06, 04:37 PM   #1
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"Birds in the Metal"...Mixtape Track...Leave Links and I'll Return ASAP...
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Word...deep track.

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Old 04-06-06, 04:40 PM   #2
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Quality is dope...beat caught my attention and had me turning off the television so I could hear it. The hook is fucking awesome...listening right now, deep lyrics, the woman is coming on, and it seems like a good addition to the track...weird thing about your line about your town...since you were saying you wanted to stay in your roots. Best yet bro, it's going on the IPod...
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Old 04-06-06, 04:53 PM   #3
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hmm...ehhh @ the beat

bad quality to on the beat..........u come in nice....emotion is great....queality is still ehhh
lyrics r hot.....nice multis n shit....a bit hard to understand em tho....deep shit man....

hooks nice...2nd verse is pritty much the same

tight shit man..idk about the beat tho
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Old 04-06-06, 05:22 PM   #4
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Old 04-06-06, 05:36 PM   #5
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I happen to love the beat...


sounds like u messed up at one part of the hook...but it's nice


dubs don't match up that nicely

good flow wit the beat tho...

lyrics are good


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Old 04-06-06, 06:05 PM   #6
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Beat is nice, nice guitars...hook is nice...decent...not my style but its nice..ure flow is real nice dope...but yea dubbs are a lil off...lyrics are dope mayne...hook is growin on me..im likin the concept...delivery is nice too, ure style fits this beat..i like the sample
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Old 04-06-06, 06:18 PM   #7
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Thanks for the feed...uppin.
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Old 04-06-06, 07:43 PM   #8
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Old 04-07-06, 10:43 AM   #9
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Old 04-07-06, 10:50 AM   #10
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Hook is dope, Buuuuuuttt.. Your delivery of it needs more tone and you sounded a bit shaky on it... You really gotta use a more husky and solid voice on that..

Lyrics are deep.. Inspiring even.. Could use some work on ya rhyme schemes and delivery.. But I feel the message ya gettin accross..

The beat was tight, dont really know about the singing parts.. Sounds a bit too country...

Overall, this is a mad big improvement on the last shit I heard of yours.. Jus a few minor problems that'll fix themselves up through experience.
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Old 04-07-06, 11:55 AM   #11
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Thanks for the feed...uppin. I will return the favor.
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Old 04-08-06, 12:49 PM   #12
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can you rtf..to my joint "Now Ride" wit UNF, it shud be jus below this
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Old 04-08-06, 02:49 PM   #14
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yo.... beat is pretty gay at first.. but the song is over and i like the beat now....

like cho said quality is ehh...

hook is very monotone... but gets the point across

i dont really like theese kinda tracks.. but shit sounds like my life....i really liked this track man... dope lyrics flow was simplistic but it gave this song a laid back kinda feel...nice shit for real.. third verse was the best ..... 8/10

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Old 04-08-06, 10:07 PM   #15
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