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calis_h_n_i_c 1 100.00%
jay-twist 0 0%
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Old 01-02-04, 05:42 AM   #1
jay-twist
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Jay-Twist vs. Calis_H_N_I_C

IP: CB55 37A5

10 bars min

no bytin/crew....ect.


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Old 01-02-04, 05:47 AM   #2
jay-twist
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Old 01-02-04, 05:57 AM   #3
Calis_H_N_I_C
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i drop more lyrical bombs
than the coalition of the willing did to saddam
fuck the matrix, i am one
have ya moms saying "stop, look what ya did to my son"
and i dont need practice,like iverson
now look how i- verse-son
when i get on da mic its cur-tains
ya hear the cheers (bravo, bravo, bravo)
even have ya own grew like that man is hot yo
they call me the lyrical hitler cuz i got my own gestapo
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Old 01-02-04, 06:09 AM   #4
jay-twist
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well first of all dawg...u can rap about 4 words or more...you just lost this rap battle...and since ur hitler.....BOTH world wars....mess wit me dawg...ya get blown backwards....ya step up...ill flip u like an old mattress....listen here her man...this cat held a gun for 3 seconds...and had a CALIS on his H_A_N_D....u dont understand...ur whack...and that be so!...ur punch reminds me of the shit on laffy taffy jokes.....this battle is over...and i know its still startin...cause the only way ull be famous...is when theey put you on milk cartons....im out........this cat is a clown....
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Old 01-02-04, 06:25 AM   #5
jay r
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Old 01-02-04, 08:55 AM   #6
Limitz
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someone please ban jay r. is is fucking annoying. anyways, both of these verses were wack, but let me break it down for ya.

jay - first of all, change ur layout. hardly any punches. bad flow. no multis (well i couldnt tell). no vocab. terrible drop
2/10

calis - ok punches. bad flow. no multis. vocab was...ehh. bad drop.
3.8/10

both need to elevate. p'z

vote - calis

PS: both jay r and jay-twist have the same IP. p'z
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