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Old 02-11-04, 06:53 PM   #1
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[Wk2]Koalatee vs Auspicious

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Verses Due: Wednesday, February 18th, 2004
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Topic: Missing Pieces
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Old 02-13-04, 11:15 AM   #3
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Old 02-17-04, 09:52 PM   #4
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Utilized, it grew from lies;
together, in unearthly tenements,
Hailed young J & J - near the epicenter that would birth the sentiment. .
Worse than Eminem;
their puzzle saturated by fiends with pompous bids,
It rested in a pre-fabricated picnic beside the stream of consciousness. .
The expected breeze dejected these;
Both Js bore heart-felt emotions,
Sadly, party lines imparted minds and became a part of the quotient. .
The millenium plus four;
no telling what the man would risk for one,
That is, J: who asked to enchant their love in the San Fransisco sun. .

- . . & they did so . . -

Upon returning to the Cape
a paradise was made while they reclined,
At first, it seemed perfect: finally, the safest of havens for their kind. .
The puzzle at water's edge
a heightened stream where creases existing. .
Overthrew ripples for the throne: as for the puzzle, its pieces were missing!
Days elapsed, gaising back
now running - there was no masking of stares,
For their cause had been engulfed in the stream, & was gasping for air. .
Rescuing their cause,
The Js scolded it, 'You shouldn't swim in weather!'
Then, silence - realizing the severity: the pieces wouldn't fit together. .

- . . Conclusion . . -

Never leaving the cape,
they left 'their closet' and distastes,
Behind - while providing greedy candidates with another topic for debate. .
Never found the pieces,
qualms embossed in their yearnful pleas,
They let the pieces go to pieces - somewhere, lost in absurdity. .
Never expressing discontempt,
the 'gays' of glam and disco,
Didn't erase stereotypes, but remembered their days in San Francisco
Never denying the nevers
they never yelled from ratched neuses,
At least James & Jim had the chance to dwell in Massachusetts. .

that is, with their missing pieces.

- (E)quality.
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