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Old 03-13-04, 10:41 AM   #1
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And You, You Broke My Heart

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…And You, You Broke My Heart

I yearn for your touch
Soft fingertips wiping away my tears
The presence of an angel
Suffocating from thoughts of you

Through bleeding hearts and broken wings
My voice is gone so I can't sing
About all the things I feel inside
It hurts me, but they haven't died
I'm hurting more than you'll ever know
But I still love you so

Are you happy where you are?
Thinking of what almost might've been
I'm still drowning in your essence
At least you're not alone

Through bleeding hearts and broken wings
My voice is gone so I can't sing
About all the things I feel inside
It hurts me, but they haven't died
I'm hurting more than you'll ever know
But I still love you so

I didn't mean to fall for you
I knew it would only
Cause pain and heartbreak
And I fell for you
And I feel the pain
And you, you broke my heart

I didn't mean to fall for you
I knew it would only
Cause pain and heartbreak
And I fell for you
And I feel the pain
And you, you broke my heart
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Old 03-25-04, 06:44 AM   #2
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yo I feel you dog on the topic.....

so I thought this poem was hot.....

one love.....
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Old 04-07-04, 06:07 PM   #3
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Old 04-08-04, 08:50 PM   #4
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That was a tight flow.....nice work!
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Old 04-08-04, 11:48 PM   #5
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Sounds like a rock type song... Not that bad. Good job. Check some of mine. They are in my siggy.
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