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6-11 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no hates


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-10-04 at 12:58 AM

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afropimp has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-10-04 12:29 AM.

MC_SYX has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-10-04 12:32 AM.

just cuz im da coldest dont me u should fear dis
even tho this is text yo hole fam goin hear it
now where is// all da muffuckin competition
i might as well go battle at tha rap olympix
got me battlin un MC_syx
u couldnt win if they voted before i dropped
shootin red octagons out of my glock(stop signs)
that made ur hart go stop// yo whole crew sed syx u got got
ur records 1-1 its gonna be 1-2 like its countin
u winnin is like cristopher reeves climbin a mountain

Alright let me set this bitch off, in about two seconds have you outlined in chalk,
Thinkin he's hard but you know that ain't the truth, says he's a pimp when he's the fuckin protistute,
I'll have you down n' out gaspin for your own breath, make you scream n' shout while graspin on my homie death,
now you lookin for a remedy tryin to pick up the pieces, while i give you mentally sexually transmitted diseases,
Fuckin you telekinetically, genetically i'm still makin you feel unsettling,
Oh yeah keep thinkin your hard leave you with intelectual and lyrical scars,

uppin for honest non hate votes uppin 4 votes

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upin for honest non hate votes come on noww peeple

Voted For: MC_SYX

mc good wordplay and vocab on the end there but your verse atrted out mad whacked if you had the end bars or shit like them throughout you wouldve won this by a long shot. your flow was good.afro good flow i like the voted diss aand your ending was good but you was worse then mc on this and he had better punches then you he gets the vote.

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Voted For: afropimp

good shit afro merk this mufucka like he stole somethin
capitol punishment in dis bitch MC_syx killa

dont count that vote i meant to click on feedback
my bad

uppin for votes uppin for votes vote honestly

I felt like both of these verses were really weak but heres my hounest opinions/vote...

MC SYX: Sketchy structure, good vocab near the end (although it started to not make sense), and some words did not rhyme. I just wasnt feelin ya flow man, some ok punches in there i suppose...3/10

Afropimp: haha, good closer, i dug it. alright vocab...needs to be elevated a bit, also had a sketchy structure (hard to see what words ya rhyming), good punches, alright flow...5/10

My vote goes to Afropimp in my hounest opinion because his verse flowed a lot better and actually had decent punches...

Voted For: afropimp

metas-afro
punches-afro
flow-afro
opener-afro
closer-afro


afro took this 4 sho one side no hat tho MC u had no rimes or flow or punchs worhty no personal rilly on either side no hate return tha favor afropimp gets my vote http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141136