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Old 11-10-04, 08:48 PM   #46
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17 hmm...

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Old 11-13-04, 12:48 AM   #47
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Old 11-14-04, 09:58 PM   #48
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Old 11-16-04, 02:25 AM   #49
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for$aken, i knew this title sounded familiar... lol.. u re-upped this after like 2 months and shit, but it's still just as good.. u silly nigga.. lol
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Old 11-17-04, 07:59 PM   #50
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for$aken, i knew this title sounded familiar... lol.. u re-upped this after like 2 months and shit, but it's still just as good.. u silly nigga.. lol


word because I'm............................
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Old 11-20-04, 12:10 AM   #51
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Old 11-27-04, 07:23 PM   #52
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Old 11-28-04, 04:28 PM   #53
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*Smile (The Eyes Of A Young African Teenager)*

(Inspired by everyone having rough times......)
(title Inspired by a lot of people....)

everyday I have a excruciating struggle in life and at school~
I live in a all-white community and discriminating me is the rule~
so once I wake up I put on my eye-liner and my favourite lipstick~
I try to put a *smile* on my face and think of the true politics~
Mr. Mandela, Ms. Parks both overcame the hate in they lives~
pain, anger and other things pile up in my brain's archives~
*school bus comes* I get on and people stare ... Am I different?~
it's like they never saw a African before...Was I born a accident?~
I arrived at school and made my way to physical education~
last pick on a team...no one likes me thats a big complication~
I get shoved to the floor and they calling me a porch monkey~
then call me a illiterate and I say "fuck it" cuz I'm not a monkey~
after that class time went by so quickly then school finally ends~
after this day resided I lost all my remaining goddamn confidence~
that very night I cried myself to sleep in the fuckin' darkness~
in my dreams my mental suffering fades away in evanesce~
while still in my dream I see my ancestors farming on their land~
but than a KKK member came struck them no time to understand~
right before my relative died I swear he looked straight at my face~
and mouthed the words "fight for your rights don't be a disgrace"~
a split second later I woke up.....and inside I contained a lions pride~
and I shouted " respect my entire race let that be known worldwide~



^^^wow I put emotion in there so I need no hate............................
and to all the white people on this site don't take this offensive.........
I wasn't saying that all white people are like that I know there
are nice people of that race & I respect that and if you do take
that offensively Im sorry for the misunderstanding.......................

and people note I'm not African/Jamaican...........
and also this was made because I wanted to do a topical on this
and I wrote this right now since no one will accept my bitchslapped
threads at all............................................... ...............

(NOTE: This was originally posted in Open Mic but it only got
2 replies so I am trying my chances on poetic stuff.........)

(ALSO I AM NOT A GIRL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)

!~rate it~! __/10

omg text battle now whore im using that as a personal omg im gonna own you
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Old 11-29-04, 02:31 PM   #54
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good piece str8 up...altho i aint too good at dis poetry shit but i was feeling dis...good vocab, ect
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