good drop, flow was there, vocab was bangin, and everything comes together well not just jumbled, good piece with some nice raw emotion, lookin foreward to read some more of your drops

yeah this was a badass piece of writing....good wordin and it was very descriptive.....sounds just like my ex-girlfriend/still girlfriend.....you depicted your topic very accurately

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werd yo that shyt had madd emotion nice werk kid.-1-

Thanks all

here i was trying to quote sections of your piece, but then i would have quoted it in its entirety. definately a piece that has no standout lines for its a standout piece...

structure fitting... transition and flow from different aspects in this relationship were smooth and easy to follow. a well rounded piece, which any reader can either relate to or appreciate for the honesty and straight forward approach. seems like you wrote heart-felt and not trying to appease readers... w/o absractions, to the point...

Bravo... keep contributing your pieces, def. an enjoyable read...

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I can Definately Releate to this.........Nice ass Piece......Things Like this a what makes Life so Beautiful.......Things Happen Though We have to move on with our Lives.....Dope Piece...

1ne

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Thanks...

I will drop more poetry sometime soon

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^NEEDA A LIFE BEEN BANEED AN STILL5000 post.damn on a website u gunnaget money from this site naw..why dont u ge a life.man u liike wut 20 shit kids are on here that go to school an shit

like 16-17 even 15.

im hi fuk a typo fuka chrit hes a wak version of brooklyn thats why he cudnt beat him

^lmao!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

@ the post comment, kids so dumb = (

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that shit was awesome! you obviously have mad talent. I can relate to it and you really expressed your emotions well and i just wanted to keep on reading. It was def. kik ass... Good job.