Where the bluest of ocean meets pink skies on the horizon.
Rainbow Raindrops capsizing; The morning sun rising.
These interaction of hues, are of satisfaction to you?
You say yes, But I know your attraction's untrue.
The mixed green and light blue, of a mornings fresh dew.
The black night changing to, the white moonlight's debut.
Through and through; I cant see how one could draw this view:
That when its nature, its beauty. But when its skin, it's taboo.

All too true. We're Like a 'facial-formation', to be honest,
Our interracial-relation causes people to 'frown' on-us.
Cuz they keep bigoted minds shut-tight like an eye-lid
And fidget with the twines of anything hy-brid.
For they love the blossom of deep purple, and would never wish to fade-it.
But forget it was blue and red petals that came together to create-it.
May not fit-in ur-group if one's peach and another's brown
But we stick-to-our-'roots', since we 'hold eachother down'.
Feelings deep, you can't dodge it; you just can't dislodge it
Why must ours be a battle between love and logic?
Love says: "Ive been there since the first time you kissed-him"
Logic says: "You cant marry a muslim and a Christ-ian."
But forget-them, and fuck that whole world they exist-in,
For if we were resisting, look what we'd be missing.
Tho he has different hues in the hint of his face,
I wouldnt fix them to match; not a tint nor a trace.
Even tho if they did, we would be more accepted
But why wish change on somethin already perfected.
I see his true colors, and there's nothing Id trade
For together, we make the most beautiful shade.

Wow. You've seriously got a way with words. I mean, you rhyme things and you play with them and it doesn't even look like your trying yet you got such awe-inspiring material. And the subject matter itself, inter-raciality, is expressed through your veiws on how you see it and it makes others, in this case me, see what you see.

See, when you speak of the sea, I see what you see, see? Yeah...

Amazing.

~Shalom~

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.

Got no real comments on this piece....it was powerful, and er...well as i said, don't feel my words would do it justice...

...so instead i'll just say it was so damn well written like always...

...resp...

Madd respect for this piece. Tight wordplay and like he said, words couldn't do it justice....

Thank you very much Necro, V, Heisse...Mad Luv to u all for takin the time. I appreciate it. Thanks again.

that was sick as hell, for real!!!!! ive read alot of poetry an that shyt was tha truth...thats about all i could say, peep my shyt tho i wanna see what u would think its under has ne1 ever felt like this...

I can honestly say out of all the pieces i have read i would say this is the most beautiful one. I read poems from my gal friends and i love it. So pleaze do write some more i look forward to it.

How long did it take u to write it? I wish i could write like that but i have trouble gettin stuff from mind to paper.

Thanks a lot.
This particular piece I think too me about 20-25 mins to write.

I don't usually do this. As i don't excel at doing them (i.e. i stink at them usually)..

..but you want to do a collab sometime? I'm just intrigued by the way you write, yet reach such depth with imagery. And would like to play off that.

Anyway, if you don't, it aint no bother. Just an idea, one that is kind of fleeting at that....

PM if the answer is oui or si...

V, you've got mail.

Damnnnn...that hit a nerve wit me haha- it was so true, like..it was one of the poems u read, and u jus think-
the flow--on point... the topic--on point is was jus amazing, i dont know how else to put it, jus take it as the highest complement..

^Thank you. I really appreciate it.

One more time up

I have been wantign to get to read some of your shit but never got the chance until now. Your good real good.. (can't be better than me though *wink*) You know i"m palying we can be equal lol... OoNnEe