::10 Lines::
::Blind spit::
::Normal rules::
::No deadline::

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Checkin In...
So Check In Ryan
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Check.

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Perfection will be promised in time.

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Look at token, he's comin a bit short of cents
A mod caught up in glory...
.....time to defeat 'em, and beat in some sense
Remix, Token, Rekot... theres a list of changes
Had problems with camarac...
......and thew a hissy fit over textual exchanges
Get this kid a noose to reduce the abuse i produce
Wittyness in disuse, i refuse ryans lame excuse
*Coins, tokens, quarters, dimes, and nickels
Flows like loose change.....
...embarassing enough, yet it sounds so simple
Back in the day, couldn't get in Elements Elite
So ya had ta join Elemental...
......yet again Token killed in the attempt of defeat

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Blah, KeyD... If you win you are on the elite list.

Your strategy is to annoy me.. Patience running thin
Idiot hacked into my desk theme..
..Just to get under my skin
Kids concepts are wack.. with punches so played
Fuck getting in Elite..
..You're getting the opposite of OKed
This is quite funny.. Something like a short joke
but on the contrary..
..You really are dope!
I'm way ahead of you.. Never stood a chance
Only slightly in view..
..When taking a glance!
Kids got no personality.. So Dry.. So Brittle
I'd say you went overboard..
..But your weight lies somewhere in the middle!

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Respect is all I'm after.
Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation

Hmmm..........Heated..
Nice drop Token.......
No beef.. still numba 1 stunna's

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ILLUNATIC =

Look at token, he's comin a bit short of cents
A mod caught up in glory...
.....time to defeat 'em, and beat in some sense
LINE OK MAYBE A LIL PLAYED THO
Remix, Token, Rekot... theres a list of changes
Had problems with camarac...
......and thew a hissy fit over textual exchanges
OK
Get this kid a noose to reduce the abuse i produce
Wittyness in disuse, i refuse ryans lame excuse
NICE MULTIES
*Coins, tokens, quarters, dimes, and nickels
Flows like loose change.....
...embarassing enough, yet it sounds so simple
LIKED THIS LINE
Back in the day, couldn't get in Elements Elite
So ya had ta join Elemental...
......yet again Token killed in the attempt of defeat
UMMM OK

TOKEN =

Your strategy is to annoy me.. Patience running thin
Idiot hacked into my desk theme..
..Just to get under my skin
NICE OPENER
Kids concepts are wack.. with punches so played
Fuck getting in Elite..
..You're getting the opposite of OKed
SHIT HOT LINE
This is quite funny.. Something like a short joke
but on the contrary..
..You really are dope!
OK
I'm way ahead of you.. Never stood a chance
Only slightly in view..
..When taking a glance!
UMM OK
Kids got no personality.. So Dry.. So Brittle
I'd say you went overboard..
..But your weight lies somewhere in the middle!
OK

OK
OPENER = TOKEN, I REALLY LIKED IT.
FLOW = WENT TO TOKEN BUT ONLY JUST, HIS WAS A LIL BETTER ALL THE WAY THROUGH.
STRUCTURE = TIE COZ THE STYLE WAS SOOO FIMILIER.
PUNCHES = TOKEN LIKE HIS PUNCHES A LIL MORE.
PERSONALS = ILL YA KEEPT THROWIN THEM AT HIM, MORE THAN TOKEN.
MULTIES = ILL , FOR THAT LINE IN THE MIDDLE OF THE PIECE
CLOSER = TIE, CANT DECIDE.

SO VOTE GOES TO TOKEN, ONLY JUST, THE PUNCHES DID IT FOR ME, NICE BATTLE YA'LL

VOTE = TOKEN

Look at token, he's comin a bit short of cents
A mod caught up in glory...
.....time to defeat 'em, and beat in some sense
nice personal.. ..pretty direct.. ..but 8/10
Remix, Token, Rekot... theres a list of changes
Had problems with camarac...
......and thew a hissy fit over textual exchanges
nice combination of a punch and personal.. ..but 7/10
Get this kid a noose to reduce the abuse i produce
Wittyness in disuse, i refuse ryans lame excuse
wow yea.. ..nice multis no doubt.. ..8/10
*Coins, tokens, quarters, dimes, and nickels
Flows like loose change.....
...embarassing enough, yet it sounds so simple
nice lil meta fix up here and personal.. ..8/10
Back in the day, couldn't get in Elements Elite
So ya had ta join Elemental...
......yet again Token killed in the attempt of defeat
decent punchline.. ..7/10
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Your strategy is to annoy me.. Patience running thin
Idiot hacked into my desk theme..
..Just to get under my skin
nice creativity kinda blah.. ..ok punch.. ..but 7/10
Kids concepts are wack.. with punches so played
Fuck getting in Elite..
..You're getting the opposite of OKed
kinda simple nonetheless showed vet quality.. ..ok punch.. ..8/10
This is quite funny.. Something like a short joke
but on the contrary..
..You really are dope!
witty ass shit^.. ..nice personal.. ..7/10
I'm way ahead of you.. Never stood a chance
Only slightly in view..
..When taking a glance!
nice creativity.. ..good punch.. ..8/10
Kids got no personality.. So Dry.. So Brittle
I'd say you went overboard..
..But your weight lies somewhere in the middle!
good werdplay.. ..nice closer.. ..ok punch.. ..8/10
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token 38 score ratio.. ..
ILLunatic 38 score ratio.. ..
shit was pretty much tie but imma give it to ILL cuz had more multis,personals,metaphors.. ..
vote/ILL.. ..
return the favor and hit my battle in return

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113287

Umm.. why isn't this in elevated?

I hate Front Line voters.. no one gets any wit or wordplay.

Moved

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Thing wouldn't know how to vote if his life depended on it...

Umm token got this
Sorry ILL but he just had more witty punches
Tha oKed punch was ill..same with Toke's closer..
Ya opener was a good flip..
ILL didn't really see that many punches in yours...
your closer was tha best on..

v/ Token

hit this up...both of you

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113270

Blah, Moved back to FL cuz ILLunatic said so.

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Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

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Vote Token

Both came weak as fuck. However token had the better lines....
I'm disappointed in you both.

Ill - too focused on multis yet.... in using too many multis you are ignoring quality punches for an attempt at flow. You had 2 good lines.

Token - Really weak from you as well.... but I counted 2 bars with nice potential. In a battle of 4 vs 2 the 4 wins. Hence Token takes it in a closer battle than it should have been.

I'll explain further if ya'll start to bitch

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2 Improper votes...
Chrit & Wise Ways

See this thread

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...Fuck it... Token Wins... End of story...
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