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05-06-04, 08:14 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Life wasn't easy
IP: B498 633B
Life:
I'm study constipaton with it,this thing called life Cause every moment since I was born I been livin in strife Never could I plan for the future ahead I was livin life day by day strugglin instead And when i see these thug niggas be so quit wit a gat From my past just lookin back i know ain't no honor in that I understood the rules of the game at age seven My fams be poppin niggas but im lookin forward to going to heaven I aint downin these niggas i just know how it feels And if i have to be more pacific then don't stop me i will I was hesitaten i grew up in a drughouse With thugs and crackheads and ho's without a doubt I done seen niggas get shot and niggas lye down For good and left my thoughts shocked without a sound No mom no dad 23 of us split up Still no sign of my parents in years apparently no luck Well 22 of us now my sister done died And boy was my heart broken everyday i still cry Family members dyin left and right Hell I was damn near dead shot at more than twice Livin on the streets from time to time Not to defeat people but from the heart is why i rhyme And the closets things to me was my sister and heart And gats is my wosrt enemy thats what took us apart I mean to witness her death her body fall into mine Broke me down real bad but i guess it was time So from the heart im thanking my sister nobody else Except my grandmother for helping me reorganize myself Takin me in when i was alone with no place to go And even if you in a coama i want you to know That i luv you Holla at ya girl POEMS mistake of death mistake of death part2 they pretain to how my sister death and revenge in the poetic scriptures Last edited by missy : 05-06-04 at 08:19 PM. |
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05-06-04, 08:22 PM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: 9E88 B351
That shit was hot, stay up!!!!!
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05-06-04, 08:51 PM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: B498 633B
Thanks I need the feed back
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05-06-04, 09:00 PM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: 0DCE 3504
That was real good. it had a lot of emotion. keep flowin
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05-07-04, 05:53 AM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: 98BB 1745
Nice drop. My only critique about it would be that the flow was abit off but the lyrics were ill very deep and you can tell itcame from the heart.
Keep spittin' Peace -TiK-
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05-07-04, 11:05 PM | #6 | |||||
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IP: EC0B 84C7
dawg...i could feel wut ur sayin..keep spittin man..8/10
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05-07-04, 11:25 PM | #7 | ||||||
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IP: C131 5CE9
yo just readin that put some ill mental together for me. kept placin my own pictures ova it yo keep it up on da real holla back at me aight.....................
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05-08-04, 10:11 AM | #8 | |||||||
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IP: 79D3 817A
yo i liked this alot i like ur story line the flow was shaky at times but u picked it back up...nice 7/10 *DUECES*
SB
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05-08-04, 10:34 AM | #9 | ||||||
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dis wass fiya stay spittin u good at it one.....
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