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Old 09-11-04, 02:44 AM   #1
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Phenom & Calam - You gonna love me

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track of the month - seriously....

Phenom & Calam - You Gonna Love Me


YOU'RE GONNA LOVE ME

PHENOM

Who it is... - ya ya'll know it's the Phenom/
all ya'll suckas know that He-strong, when the beat drops then I be-gone/
never Sleep-on...me , cause I correct you, when you be-wrong/
On the mic in front of the crowd - is where I'll always be-long/
yo I keep-on with the battles, but release my hidden genius/
My writtens are feverish, might as well just keep on freein this/
believe in this track, enjoy and live the experiance/
Just by hearin this - cats have been known to go delirious/

I'm Serious - so hate again, the fact that I'm Canadian/
Cats laugh, then hear my lyrics - and that gets em dazed again/
I play to win, Don't care if you a foe or maybe a friend/
I sprinkle rhymes with seasonin, so cold the way I'm freezin men/
I see ya end, Like sands through the hour glass, the hours pass/
your sound gets sour fast, when Phenom-in-all's sig-sauer blasts/
my power lasts, now the top cats watchin their throne/
Cause like a van on movin day - yo - I'm taking it home/ - C'MON

CALAMITY
Understand me dog, rappings the life i was given/
im just tryna be diverse like the color from prisms/
half the my battles i dont care about, the other half i be kidding/
i move my ball up the court, then slap it back like playing tenis/
most you haters are wrong, the other half of you chickens/
saying i suck on my songs, when audio you aint spittin/
im more than honest when living, sins not been in my mouth/
truth be told, i have better rappers inside of my couch/

ya'll cats is wack when im out,inactive and ya fires been doused/
i'll spit a hot 16 and leave your fired from house/
ima represenetive, my rhymes are definitive of the glory/
of a black suburban kid wit talent, but ignored of his story/
with out me its boring, so why yall snorin/
the kids constructin a plan to bring wealth to his shore and/
ensure that hes known in/, all the parts of the usa../
but look forward, Calamitys the only thing that stays/
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Old 09-11-04, 05:21 AM   #2
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DAMN.

I was feelin both....nice drop i have to say...............

Phen- i didnt like tha start but when u got to it..u was sick...going balistik
reppin Canada i see..lol

Cal- Nice also......U made to return to RV..lol old fashion way...lol nice drop both


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Old 09-11-04, 05:39 AM   #3
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Yo i thought this was a nice track...a lil slow for my liking but i felt it none the less...i respect both you cats in the audio field and yall both demonstrated this in this track i liked the female voice in the b/ground kinda gave it that Kanye effect which is good...both came decent flowed well rhyming was good a decent track props to both
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Old 09-11-04, 11:55 AM   #4
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i loved the beat~that "you're gonna love me', with the chick, nice, smooth beat, see now phenom~, i've listened to a lot of you're audios, and i have to say this was the best i've heard from you, i could tell you gave it you're all, and like deadly said, you went ballistic, thats why this sounded so dope, calamity~you have such a smooth voice and your flow is great, nice job both of you
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Old 09-11-04, 12:30 PM   #5
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thanks ya'll... im really feelin the love.. we was vibin on this song.. i was hesitant at first, cause i dont normaly spit on a slow joint liek this.. but after i buckled down.. i fell in love with the beat... i gotta say phenom sounded like he had something to prov,.. gon head dunny ..


uppin for ne more feedback you guys wanna give.. thanks again
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Old 09-11-04, 01:27 PM   #6
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^ word, when I first heard it I LOVED the beat, but didn't know if it fit my style. But I couldn't get it off repeat so I asked Calam if he wanted to spit some heat. We wrote some lines, it came out hot, and ya dayum right I got something to prove. Cats are sayin I'm over-rated or whatnot cause I got a few audio wins, so I'm here to prove I can spit fa real, and I'm gon keep elevating. I only been doin this a few months, and with some nice audio cats helpin a cat elevate, I can only get hotter.

Calam - you burnt this joint though man. Ya flow is straight fiyah, and you got some hot lines dun. Keep elevating and you know what its gon be.

Thanks for all the feed so far, good looks fa real. Drop links if you want return feed.

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Old 09-11-04, 06:28 PM   #7
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phenom....nah....still hate ya style...it's borin.....
calam....love your voice and flow....

but this beat...and the feel of the track jus aint my thing.
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Old 09-11-04, 09:22 PM   #8
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This track was hot yeh, man Both your flows were on top here seriously, plus the beat i was feelin too, man, nice drop, keep em comin!
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Old 09-11-04, 09:30 PM   #9
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shit was nice,

calams voice is sick man,keep them tracks comin'
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Old 09-12-04, 10:22 PM   #10
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phenom....nah....still hate ya style...it's borin.....


^ Thanks for the constructive feedback... jackass
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Old 09-13-04, 04:35 PM   #11
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calamity startin to shine on everything he gets on...
foreal tho you both came nicely on this track
- phenom sounds kinda like he standin away from the mic, but he always sound like that - I like the emotion you brought into this though-- shit was definately the best I've heard you come and I will be expecting nothing less than this in the future, Calamity killin shit lately as usual... ez.
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Old 09-13-04, 06:00 PM   #12
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that was str8 dog. i like dem dere lyrics and dem twists
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Old 10-01-04, 04:00 AM   #13
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First - iono bout the style with this speed beat...you seem kinda computerized with the flow at this pace....vocals are low.....im not feelin you on this beat...iono why....its just the tempo im not feelin...

second - OFF BEAT....ending his lines before the beat bar ends...yeah..not on beat at all....

you was straight..im just not feelin how slow the beat is.

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Old 10-01-04, 04:48 PM   #14
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^ ehh... appreciate the feed back.. i jsut dont think u like my flow hehe.. theres more than one type of flow :P... mines just not as commercial.
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Old 10-01-04, 05:37 PM   #15
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man.....i was feelin this track....i like dat beat too....maybe cuz im good on slow shit too...but yea this was a good song man...Phenom ya flow was good...good use of multis too man...Calamity...your flow did seem shaky...but still the lyrics was good...good job...
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