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Old 07-18-05, 09:05 AM   #1
Tizza
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Hey, rate this.

hey,
yo,
we cant have this fella talkin trash, just get back pop a whole in his arse.
hey look this lil pedo cant trash talk that, now, just get this rhyme kicked off who says lil kids cant rap like that, ight.

in the beginning i was confused, ma mum hitten the booze,
im liven wid ma granparents, over in england, while ma mums out smoken weed wid her friends, hey this shits real we dont
gotta pretend. with this cold world that we in.

yo now im gonna kick this rhyme out wid a bang, now who says white 12 year old boys cant rap wid slang, ight.




Ight, I aint freestyled for a few months, so Ill come up with some better ones in time.
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Old 07-18-05, 11:48 AM   #2
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Okay tizza..or whatever you wanna call ur self these dayz.(hint=Alias 4 Tizzle?)

The song is stretched an its jumbled together,2 many of the same words sorta gets Rep.

***"yo now im gonna kick this rhyme out wid a bang, now who says white 12 year old boys cant rap wid slang, ight."*****

^^^That say's it all....12 yrs old,I guess its aiight then^^^

Keep elevating!.....

I give this 4.2/10...because,Even if ur 12 you still know what multi's are and good wordplay iz HOmey!

no hate,Just ah Critic.
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Old 07-18-05, 12:36 PM   #3
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