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Old 07-02-06, 07:53 PM   #1
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Fourth Of July PICNIC

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Fourth Of July PICNIC

TORNADO boys got keen eyes and see extreme vibes
Between my thighs so they rap hard for my crème pies
Flirting galore unlock certain doors so the dream flies
Cutie brown booty round duty renowned to strut butt a lots
Body cuts are hot, panties so soaked in juice the threads
Broke loose boys wear bling that could choke a goose bed-
Springs shake and things break like head boards, lips red
TORNADO I became excited quick when I was invited to picnic
On forth of July shook about the cook out had to dress myself slick
At a picnic rally you can wreck a nation in attendance with
The Declaration of Independence love is clean and swift
Like a bloodstream it up lifts oxygen, to be in love is a gift
So slick the arithmetic so wet and confusing my thoughts drift
Crystalline on my Bristol mind seems dismal sometime
This is a perfect date and folk circulate through the park designed
Like Mount Trashmore, cash soar through the pockets of the people
One boy said I was fine meat and its time to eat but not enough seats
Some stayed on their feet “oh this is crap so I sit in this boy’s lap so sweet
He unzipped his pants really equipped for romance but it was hidden doe
And I didn’t know so I sit on a cock contagious hot and outrageous Oh!
It slid right in hot cream puff, some obscene stuff thighs open pies smoking
Oh I was surprised at the fat cocky happening down there I moved around hoping
To escape but this boy wanted true cake its too late oh he jest grabbed my waist
Hold up wait a minute too late his cock just stuck up in it tried but couldn’t taste
My food
 
Old 07-02-06, 07:54 PM   #2
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Old 07-02-06, 08:53 PM   #3
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yo dis koo, it had sum good points n sum spots were it fell off but for da most part i wuld give it a solid 6/10

keep it up

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Old 07-03-06, 05:14 PM   #4
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