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02-23-05, 02:05 PM | #1 | ||||
I'm BAAAAAAAAKK
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I've Been Runnin...
IP: D2B8 EE3F
i've been ruunin for a while, seems like i been off track//
but im back, to attact the glamour that comes wit spitten the facts// see i watched some of these cats who supposed to b all datt// but they lack real talent an add to the numbers who wack// i've endured parents lyin in hospital beds pushin out new seeds// herbs are not wat i need caz im grass an them hoes just weeds// wat is net beef??? just some shit that i really dont need// a bunch of 14 year old kids claimin to be P A to the C// barkin up the wrong tree tryin to shut up an silence me// but the truth rises like helium for every eye to see// these cats is puss an i convey that in a literal way// im not joinin no fuckin crew, i did that back in the day// my eyes is on the prize like doctor king on the hills of GA// im focused, let some wide eyed punk try to lead me a stray// im a vet, the game i see now through experienced optics// part of the hip-hop FBI here to stop all this pop shit// i dont usually name drop but here's a bar for those who pop shit// Avalon fuck suckin why dont you jus go on an slop dick// an thats all im gonna say about that..... Last edited by 3rd-Shift : 02-24-05 at 04:12 PM. |
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02-23-05, 02:11 PM | #2 | ||||
I'm BAAAAAAAAKK
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IP: D2B8 EE3F
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=178545
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02-23-05, 02:13 PM | #3 | |||||||
Middle Weight
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IP: 11AF 50EC
dis was short, but sweet.....
a bunch of 14 year old kids claimin to be P A to the C// ^^fav line but yea good multies n some good punches.....hmmmm structure was iight, wordplay could b worked on a lil bit but good vocab no doubt....hmmmmmmm good piece overall.......keep it up...1 |
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02-23-05, 02:15 PM | #4 | ||||
I'm BAAAAAAAAKK
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IP: D2B8 EE3F
yup...............
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02-24-05, 02:04 PM | #5 | ||||
I'm BAAAAAAAAKK
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IP: D2B8 EE3F
Uppin Bastards I Hate Rv Politics
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02-24-05, 04:09 PM | #6 | ||||
E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: ECB3 36A0
It was aight man, decent wordplay, some things seemed a little forced in plaes, but it was straight, nice flow an decent wordplay, you'll get better as you rhyme more ofetn now that ya back, 7/10 tho'
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02-24-05, 04:25 PM | #7 | ||||
I'm BAAAAAAAAKK
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IP: D2B8 EE3F
thankxxxx for the feed
uppin |
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