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Old 02-19-07, 02:55 PM   #1
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yeerr this is just a verse i dropped outta pure boredom today, over a premo beat...didnt come out too badly in my opinion though haha

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=5023572

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Old 02-20-07, 06:15 PM   #2
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Old 02-20-07, 07:03 PM   #3
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YEA!!!!a premo beat good looks on spitting on a real hip hop beat...liked how u opened then 8 bars in u lose the intensity....u opened mad strong then kinda flatlines halfway thru....but flow was solid strait thru but alil to technical like u rode the snare perfectly, needed alil variation/change up here an there, jus a small rhythm change woulda helped the 2nd jalf tremendously but still liked it son...good drop...wished it was longer....1

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Old 02-20-07, 07:24 PM   #4
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RTF please
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240122



Anyway...


beat is slick...def. has a 90s vibe...which i love...If u made this beat, u did a good job...Ineed u to produce for me...I haven't been inspired lately

Niggas suck


flow is pretty decent here...if a tad lackluster...


wow...track was over before it began...lol


not bad for what it was tho


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