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Trivia101 5 62.50%
Threats! 3 37.50%
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Old 12-31-03, 12:21 PM   #1
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Trivia101 .vs. Threats!

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Good luck homie, post when your done.
 
Old 12-31-03, 12:43 PM   #2
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[ A Body Rolls Into A Morgue ]

- Coroner: What happened to him?
- Paramedic: Mental Failure...
- Coroner: ........what?
- Paramedic: He tryed to battle Threats!
- Coroner: When will these kids learn.....


Trivia is a little slow, but I`ll still slap this hoe
He cant hand me no-el.. christmas was a week ago
Your weak bro, face the facts, your just a fool
Cause I`m passing 101.. like the basics of school
Get drowned in a pool, Trivs whole style is stank
& I`ll give him more chin-checks.. than asian banks
Leave ya rolled over by this tank, your the queer type
N ya career hit the ground running ..... for dear life
I`ll slice ya with my knife, watch me murder my foe
Cause Triv couldnt save himself.. switching to Geico.


- Coroner: Thats too bad.. he had his whole life in front of him.

[ Coroner begins the autopsy & the lights go out on stage ]

 
Old 12-31-03, 12:50 PM   #3
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There I keyed my verse up, so dont be taking all day and shit to be posting up ten fucking lines, you wanted to battle and I even posted first. Dont feed off my verse either girly man.
 
Old 12-31-03, 04:43 PM   #4
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Yo check it
First of all what tha fuck kinda name is threats,
when u were small u took 2 long on ya mommas breasts,
This fuckin fag new, wit only 24 posts,
bitch Ill pull ya fuckin brain through ya muthafuckin nose,
got to go back on those gieco commercials,
and if u wuz a bitch u couldn't get a lap dance from steve urcle,
he says he's form Alaska da cold ass state,
This bitch has 2 go fishin in his backyard to get a dinner plate,
this nigga wasn't ready to battle esecially against me,
nigga stay in alaska cus youll get murderd in nc.
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Old 12-31-03, 04:46 PM   #5
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Old 01-01-04, 01:47 AM   #6
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Old 01-01-04, 03:06 AM   #7
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Opener----NO ONE FOR PADDY'S SAKE
Closer----Trivia
Punches----if there was a good one it was threats "more chin checks than asian banks" HA-good but set up....
Creativity----Threats
Overall Threats takes this, work on better punches, try to not set them up as everyone refers to as "PLAYED" and if you drop a good punch and you KNOW IT, maintain that standard or youll fall off
As for Trivia just work on better punches nigga, keep elevatin, try to use more complex vocab, keep uppin your game and have more original shit

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Old 01-01-04, 12:10 PM   #8
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i really have to agree with the dude above me on this one...

Threats had a couple of good punches, which really stood out in the battle and edged him the win, but he did have a couple played lines which kinda threw off the overall standard of it...

Trivia just needs a lot of elevation, his lines were too simple, nothing really direct or hard that stood out in his verse, which is why i edged out Threats more in this battle... just keep at it though...


really punches was threats, all thought a couple played ones let him down...
both of you lacked personals, which didnt make this the greatest of battles, lacked originality in ya verses...
flow and multi's were pretty even, maybe threats edging this area...
they were the main deciding factors in the battle, the rest was kinda weak from both...

props to both emcee's, but Threats gets my vote...


if either of you two could vote on my battle with buzzkill, drop an honest vote, we'd both appreciate it, thanks. 1.
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Old 01-01-04, 03:48 PM   #9
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Overall battle was a lil bit onesided.....Threats came out good with some nice disses and some witty concepts, like the chin checked punch....and the runnin for dear life punch.....nice verse...

Trivia came with the structure but the punches were lackin, no real complexity in your verse and that caused you to lose....

vote Threat

Sorry i can't poll vote yet...but if y'all could return the fav.....

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Old 01-01-04, 11:33 PM   #10
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Threats!

Trivia is a little slow, but I`ll still slap this hoe
He cant hand me no-el.. christmas was a week ago

Weak punch...

Your weak bro, face the facts, your just a fool
Cause I`m passing 101.. like the basics of school

Played...but straight


Get drowned in a pool, Trivs whole style is stank
& I`ll give him more chin-checks.. than asian banks

Weak....


Leave ya rolled over by this tank, your the queer type
N ya career hit the ground running ..... for dear life

Dope punch....


I`ll slice ya with my knife, watch me murder my foe
Cause Triv couldnt save himself.. switching to Geico.

Kinda weak..but somewhat dope
Ya need work on ya punches
Try usin personals too....
Ya verse was pretty weak till the end...
Overall......7/20




Trivia101

Yo check it
First of all what tha fuck kinda name is threats,
when u were small u took 2 long on ya mommas breasts,

Momma joke...PLAYED

This fuckin fag new, wit only 24 posts,
bitch Ill pull ya fuckin brain through ya muthafuckin nose,

Played...ya say Fuckin to much


got to go back on those gieco commercials,
and if u wuz a bitch u couldn't get a lap dance from steve urcle,

Played...weak


he says he's form Alaska da cold ass state,
This bitch has 2 go fishin in his backyard to get a dinner plate,

Personal...


this nigga wasn't ready to battle esecially against me,
nigga stay in alaska cus youll get murderd in nc.

Straight...Good punch
Ya need ta work on tha punches
Flow was straight..
Personal was dope.. ya need more
Structure was ok... needs a lil work
Overall.....8/20
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Old 01-01-04, 11:38 PM   #11
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MY break

Trivia is a little slow, but I`ll still slap this hoe
He cant hand me no-el.. christmas was a week ago

Weak punch...

Your weak bro, face the facts, your just a fool
Cause I`m passing 101.. like the basics of school

Played...but straight


Get drowned in a pool, Trivs whole style is stank
& I`ll give him more chin-checks.. than asian banks

Weak....


Leave ya rolled over by this tank, your the queer type
N ya career hit the ground running ..... for dear life

Dope punch....


I`ll slice ya with my knife, watch me murder my foe
Cause Triv couldnt save himself.. switching to Geico.

Kinda weak..but somewhat dope
Ya need work on ya punches
Try usin personals too....
Ya verse was pretty weak till the end...
Overall......7/20




Trivia101

Yo check it
First of all what tha fuck kinda name is threats,
when u were small u took 2 long on ya mommas breasts,

Momma joke...PLAYED

This fuckin fag new, wit only 24 posts,
bitch Ill pull ya fuckin brain through ya muthafuckin nose,

Played...ya say Fuckin to much


got to go back on those gieco commercials,
and if u wuz a bitch u couldn't get a lap dance from steve urcle,

Played...weak


he says he's form Alaska da cold ass state,
This bitch has 2 go fishin in his backyard to get a dinner plate,

Personal...


this nigga wasn't ready to battle esecially against me,
nigga stay in alaska cus youll get murderd in nc.

Straight...Good punch
Ya need ta work on tha punches
Flow was straight..
Personal was dope.. ya need more
Structure was ok... needs a lil work
Overall.....8/20
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Old 01-02-04, 12:10 AM   #12
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Old 01-02-04, 12:19 AM   #13
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Old 01-02-04, 01:40 AM   #14
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I have to go with trvia with this one. His sturucture was better his flow was not but his last punchlines is was did it for me.
 
Old 01-02-04, 12:28 PM   #15
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This site is falling to massive shit.


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