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01-01-05, 03:33 PM
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Critic Vs. Verbal Abuse
IP: 3240 794D
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Battles Go Up Friday Check In Due Sunday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time Verses Due Tuesday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time Voting Ends Thursday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time 20 Lines Minimum 40 Lines Maximum No Biting No Recycling Do Not Go Over The Line Limit Or Under The Line Limit Meaning No Less Than 20 Lines No More Than 40 Lines You Must Vote On 3 Battles Per Week And Edit Them Into Your Check-In.. If You Dont Do So, Youre Banned From The Tourney The Following Week Topic: Alcoholism
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01-03-05, 08:17 PM
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IP: 5867 FD83
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01-03-05, 09:27 PM
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IP: 5867 FD83
Alcoholism
i run my corse... & genetic force has my ora on all fours. all my hatred i blame on a liquid source. its not the norm. this storm has me so caught up. swallow pride & drink hard; is how i was brought up. since youth i came up, drinking on holidays. which lead to entire days of drinking games. paps always said it was more like a sport. & to never move out, that hed always support. soon came 04...july 4th, more coronas n henney. all was good until it claimed our last penny. nothing left but hugs n breath. so i got a job. nearly seventeen, worked a minute & bought a dodge... ...dakota with a broken moter, i hated sober life. wasnt long before paps signed away his wife. & that was the end of that. my habbits started again years later. nineteen, a highschool grad & a yaught club waiter. things were looking up, until i picked up a bottle. began to consume in it, like a sean john model. never thought i'd be an alcoholic like pap. until that day i woke up in a hollister top. i prayed & i prayed, "God, gimmie a break... one more mistake & i let death decided fate." as if it wasnt already at worst, paps died that afternoon. for months in solitude, i lay wrapped in cacoon. forever ruined, nothing to do but to resume the fluid. this was destiny since birth, i already i knew it. i cant complain much longer, my health is no concern. theres no one in my life, so theres no one it can hurt. cancer wont claim me, no one will. ya think now i would quit... "nope, more refills". latley the drinks have had soothing effect, making me moody. i sit home all day, accompanied by beer & gangster movies. the whole hood thing interested me some. so i purchased a gun & picked up the liquor hit n run. shit was fun for a minute, then i easily got bored with it. so i schemed up plans to freely get me six civic. i went down for GTA's, i couldnt even plead my case... i was faded, its probaly why i was given 10,000 days. & that was the end of that. something quick. good luck Critic.
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01-04-05, 07:33 AM
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IP: 2041 AFC0
Sup I have been away since December and I'm not really gonna be that
active on RV anymore. I didn't even know I was in this, sorry fam but I wont be taking part in this anymore VA should get the win. Stay up 1~ |
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01-04-05, 03:52 PM
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Knock out kings fur life
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Ok well I will just throw down this you had a good topic and you came with it with hard emotions and you had a alright flow it was not that good but keep uppin on that but it was iight.
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01-07-05, 01:37 AM
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IP: 3240 794D
Verbal Abuse Wins By No Show
Verbal Abuse +3 Critic -out of the league
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