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Old 02-28-06, 09:00 PM   #1
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Do It Real Big

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If you gonna do it, why not do it fuckin big//
Pop ya collar, hit tha floor, make a wild bitch jig//
Ride Big wheels, Got Big Bank, thats when you hard grindin//
Sell Bricks, Sell a Skank, Then you just escapin' Law Time'n//
Everybody real, felt the trunk once or twice in different stances//
But if you wanna do it big you gotta take Penitentiary chances//
I been on that gutta shit, the crack fiends know the sound//
Its gonna take alot more then a badge and a siren to hold me down//
Doing it big 24/7 get the metal and bless'M like a reverend//
Stay dressed in all black since 13; on deals past eleven//
I done seen some good boyz thrown behind bars from tha sarge//
Just because of the same flakey cat that scared to take the charge//
But I'll stay at large; Americas most wanted can't trace my description//
Shit, pigs got me acting like a pharmicist, trying to change my prescription//
But to the boyz that ran their mouth, They aint' bout' doin it big//
Just be careful you aint like that before someone splits ya wig//
"Ya Digg?"
If you see me in the streets, yall know hustlins just a race at fast pace//
I aint bout to get traped like a mouse, but see im on a chedder chase//
I seen kenfolk, sell their drugs, their house, even put there kidd for adoption//
But ya see if you wanna do it big then on tha grind is your only option//
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Old 02-28-06, 09:07 PM   #2
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Yalll leave me some feedback thanks ~WUN~
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Old 03-02-06, 08:40 PM   #3
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Yall come check it out holla at tha kidd ~WUN~
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Old 03-02-06, 09:35 PM   #4
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this was good, for a freestlye. i saw some multies scattered in there which was good, but u should add more to make the flow better. the topic wasnt all that good since many people do it over and over. the vocab was good and the structure seemed fine. overall it was an average drop, but keep working at it. hit up one of my open mics doesnt matter which one. peace.
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Old 03-06-06, 06:51 PM   #5
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Fa sho cuzo good lookz on tha comment ~WUN~
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