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Old 06-24-04, 02:14 PM   #1
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I'm new to making beats, so tell me what you think!!

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I just recently started making beats so tell me how you think they are...seriously. I need a lot of feedback.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/skitz119music.htm

appreciate it.
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Old 06-24-04, 04:00 PM   #2
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it's a hot beat but after the first time the gun gets cocked back i would take the rest out if i was you
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Old 06-25-04, 01:05 PM   #3
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thanks

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i appreciate the feedback. how about the rest of them? anyone else? feel free.
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Old 06-25-04, 01:31 PM   #4
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this sounds like some old NES shit. it's a cool tune, but i dunno, i think you need some better sounds. the programming isn't too bad at all. i just peeped the first one cause i can't stream the other two at work.
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Old 06-27-04, 01:27 PM   #5
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If anything I say practice mixing a bit more so you cna develope "your" sound and download some more drum kits

but as for a beginner..this is good non the less..alot better then any of my firsts

check me out tho
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Old 06-28-04, 06:47 PM   #6
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thanks. yeah, so cuz i'm still trying to figure out where to go next, where should i go to get some new drum kits. and also, i know the mixing needs some help, where can i go to find out how to make them sound a little bit more professional?

appreciate the feedback.
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Old 07-02-04, 06:44 PM   #7
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help still wanted

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would anyone else like to tell me what they think? how about where I can get some new drumkits? hit me back
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Old 07-03-04, 01:46 PM   #8
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not a bad piece just eleate your skills a little bit and you should get better
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Old 07-06-04, 03:27 PM   #9
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I can see the potential, only prob is that those sounds are hella outdated.
I think i the 1st time I heard them was fl 2.0 .are u using fruity loops? The new fruityloops4 has an internal sampler( fruityslicer) for 1 of the channels. use that 2 sample drums/ sounds .Also find a consistent source of sounds that fit ur taste. try this 1 http://www.hiphopdrums.com/index.html. these u gotta pay 4 but it's worth it.

check out some fl handywork http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/shonjmusic.htm
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Old 07-07-04, 10:03 AM   #10
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the sounds are terrible.
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Old 07-08-04, 09:12 AM   #11
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yeah, i'm on fl. thanks. real tho, i appreciate the feed. anyplace else i should know about?
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Old 07-10-04, 06:43 PM   #12
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Yo! your style is tight, f-- what they say. I am probably a little more advanced than you, but music is just a matter of learning over time; you only get better. As for new free, quality drum samples, check out dorumalaia.com. He's the Russian homie providing the dopest percussion you can find, aside from 808, 909, etc. and all these other good samples I get from people's MPC's. Song 4 ("watch out") sounds like it should be called "suckers can't cope." I would definitely bump this in my whip, and I am rolling all over Cali, from So Cal to the Bay, so you know I have standards. There is a guy from Vallejo, CA named Young Dru who would slaughter a track like that. Also, a song like "lifeline" can be sold to bizzy bone, and that would be the bomb combination. One thing that you should look into though, is 1. making your synths sound crisper, i.e. solo each instrument and make sure it is sounding its best, then mix the song w/ all instruments playing for a good blend. 2. Take all that reverb off your kick drums every time, unless you really feel it is necessary. sometimes it's good for the mood of the song, but in most of these cases, the track would sound more realistic w/ a dry kick. 4. try layering sounds, bringing pads, string etc. in and out (make sure all notes are in the same key or at least sound good together), adding variation, and work your way up to even more impressive transitions, buildups and breakdowns. for drums, even something as simple as dropping two snare hits in a row can be a crucial element to the song. 5. read future music (cutting edge mag imported from the UK) for the latest knowledge and FREE (GOOD QUALITY) SOUNDS every issue!!! I wouldn't recommend it if I hadn't benefitted from it myself. also, don't let the price scare you. even if you only buy one issue, it is more then worth it. trust.
As for me, I currently use reason v1.0 and am on my second album. I recently purchased an MPC 4000, so I look forward to learning on that thing.
I can see you are headed on the right path, my brother, and someday we may have to git somethin crackulating. holla at me: fhb4life@hotmail.com.
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Old 07-11-04, 06:29 AM   #13
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alright alright...I peeped all your beats...and honestly they are "alright"...seems like the drums are a bit off in most of the beats...I dont know..I wasnt really feelin em...keep doin the damn thing though...pz
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Old 07-12-04, 01:57 PM   #14
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ya'll, thanks for the feed. boss, i appreciate the heads up too. good lookin. keep it comin
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Old 07-14-04, 06:19 PM   #15
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anyone know where i can get a FREE beat slicer?? FL's got the demo but the quality is crap
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