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5 | 83.33% |
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1 | 16.67% |
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06-13-05, 10:41 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 0825 899A
Still Uppin up in This Mofo .......................................
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06-13-05, 11:25 PM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: B80A A22F
Voted For: Stanza
Stanza: Yo I Hit You with 28 Punchez 14 Times so You feel 48 effects Im Makin You Feel This In The Inside Like My name Was Sex Ok..5/10 I Thought You Said You Was Leaving so Why Is You Back Bitch I Guess Lickin all Them Asses Made you Talk A Whole Lot of shit Hmm..4/10 My Bad Did I Hurt Your Feelings I meant to Say Lickin up to Dicks Washing Chicken Wit Yo tongue is the only Time U ever Kissed A Chick Blah..4/10 The Bars are comin Down to a End Like Twix Sitting In The Sun I Bet If Someone Pulled out a Hotdog Wicked Would Open His Buns Second Line Was Funny..5/10 Define you?....Whenever In Conflict You Always Get Kicked In Your Ass Always On a Niggas Dick So Thats How He gets His Ease Ghetto Pass Wack..3/10 Overall: 21/50 Wicked One: No need to use tactics to match wits with a half shit already past bitch... And rip your palms like Sunday's before easter to Catholics... Nice..6/10 Lace you just for kicks or much less... Murdered so many emcees i was Biggies and Pacs #1 suspect... Blah..Not Good..3/10 Stanza with a skilled flow? lets be real though... Iam beat you today, tomorow you wont get up right like missed field goals... Blah..4/10 Wreck imposters, tired of battling speech impaired neglected toddlers... You've got nothing left to offer, running out like forgotful shoppers... Ugh..3/10 Hurtin Stanza who went from first to last in a flash, one thing im certain... I'm strong enough to stop light, so you better be calling it curtains... Blah..3/10 Overall: 19/50 ~R~ Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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06-14-05, 10:36 AM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 0825 899A
Thanx 4 Da Votes do You Want me RTF In any Battle links then Jus Say So
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06-14-05, 10:29 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 0825 899A
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06-15-05, 11:29 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 3240 794D
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06-16-05, 03:23 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 28AD 5545
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06-16-05, 11:14 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: Wicked One
aight this came down to the wire. since what one lacked the other had. So I had to choose which one was more in importance. Stanza had personals.The opener's SETUP was better then the punchline itself,which is not a good thing. the flow was slightly strech althogh so was wicked ones. structure was good but I don't pay attention to that as much. plus the hotdog and buns line is hella played.but I guess it gave you some points anyway.Overall u get a 4/10 Wicked one. aight your punches were alot better.Seemed consecutive with wordplay.Though you lacked in personals (didn't have none) but it kept it comin with disses wordplay and flow too which lacks alot in text battles.So you did pretty good in my book.Just next time come with more personals.This verse could of been used against me and made sense.Just change the name.I give u a 7/10 vote/wicked one. peace |
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06-17-05, 06:32 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 3240 794D
Faggot ...LOL
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06-18-05, 12:27 AM
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tha illest
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: Wicked One
boom! dudes got my vote... honestly stanza's punches missed horribly... played concepts and no kinda structure or multi's even... shit was wack to me... i didnt think wicked one was wonderfull, but he was above average.. i got a feel for a flow with all those multi's they just roll smoovely... i didnt get the catholic line.. alot of ur ppunches i had to think about... but ferreal.. the feild goals and forgetfull shoppers lines were tite.. no doubt... curtains line was meeehhh didnt really like that, spose to have a strong finisher... but this dude has it no questionnn..... v/ wicked one... |
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06-18-05, 04:32 PM
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Ill Nigga Alert.
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IP: 0825 899A
Upppppppppiiiiinnnnnn^^^^^^^^^^...Will Return Honest Favor If you leave link...
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06-19-05, 03:08 AM
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Ill Nigga Alert.
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IP: 3240 794D
upppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnn................. ..........
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06-20-05, 03:55 PM
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IP: B777 C08E
Voted For: Wicked One
this one has to go to wicked one.no hate, i just think he won. stanza'z verse was just really wierd. he had some odd punches that didnt hit hard at all. just because you put someones name in a line or something about them in a line doesnt make it hard hitting. i understood all the lines but they were just kinda wack to me. stanzas lines werent really played, but his punches werent really hitting or impressive at all. his concepts were weak like the licking chicken line was terrible and you fucking know it homie... haha that whole acronym shyt is pretty lame too. wicked one's verse was decent but he had a couple of lines that stood out. the missed field goals line, the forgetful shoppers line and the calling it curtains line were all funny. that calling it curtains line was kinda self glorifying but it was still pretty good. in this battle, there were a few multies that stood out in wicked one's verse but none really in stanza's and overall, it just came down to punches because each flow was kinda off... anyways, wicked's punches were waay better which puts him as the winner of this battle as for stanza, drop some of the played concepts (acronyms sucks) V/ Wicked One |
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06-21-05, 12:44 AM
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...fuck life.
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Voted For: Stanza
stanza- good punches but some punches were wack and unneeded, alotta weird shit but i guess that helps for originality, lol, not really any multies, good personals, decent verse, nice opener and closer also.... wicked one- good flow, but bad structure decent multies, the punches were also decent but no personals in this verse good opener,, iffy closer though heres the breakdown opener-tie closer-S multies-tie punches-S personals-S structure-S vocab-W werdplay-S my vote goes to stanza Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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06-21-05, 11:34 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 28AD 5545
Aye Man Can We Jus close this battle man bcuz the votes aint gettin nowhere and I need the battle space
So I forfiet - You Can Have it closed |
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