i left feed on Straight Aim and Doomsdays joints....

yea i recorded this in my dads studio...so its good quality...its for a topical tourney on hiphopemcees.com...the topic was the perfect woman...i wrote it in about an hour...and recorded it the same day...sooo...yea i had to rush it...but im still feelin it ok....be sure to listen to the whole thing...it has a lil twist at the end....oh yea its 3 verses...so dont turn it off when the intervals play before and after the hook


http://www.soundclick.com/pro/?BandID=248194

tell me what u think of it.....The Perfect Woman

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yo the quality is dope as fuck and the flow is unstoppable..the lyrics are aight....i love the beat...defitnly a 9/0..i admit this could be played on the radio

not really feeling the beat....good flow im feeling the chorus decent lyrics lol at the ending, good job on it....overall this was a nice piece, not the best, not the worst, but nice...i cant really give it a rating thoguh cuz to tell the truth this isnt really my type of song, but still good job on it man.....

*great quality*

damn i love this you have such a good voice man, remind me of the white version of cassidy lol but anyway the tone was good emotion is good and this is tight how you actually did one full dont really good man, the lyrics were good they didnt need to be so lyrical cuz it was meant for a women and as well i love this beat hmm *asks where you got it from* lol anyway good job man i would like to see more from you.

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listening through my ATH M40fs studio monitor headphones.


The beat is cool. Nice vibe to it.

Hook was pretty good lyrically.

First verse: lyrically, it's not flashy but it sure as hell don't gotta be for a song liek this. Flow is pretty on, never went off that I can recall. The message is dead on the bucks man. So far so good.

Second verse: rhymescheme was okay - got redundnat and missed the rhymescheme here and there or the same word was used twice which is shame with a 1-syl scheme. Aside form that - I'm likin the song a lot so far.

Third verse: rushed the flow sometimes. Actually..more than a few times. lol, I love how the song ends though, lol. A dose of reality is a good thing.

All in all man, I like this song. If it were on an album, I'd definitely play it and not skip over it. Prolyl one of the best songs I've heard on RV in a loooonnnnnnnggg time overall. The quality was stellar too. that's about al lI gotta say about the song. I give it an honest 8.9/10.

Edit: One of the few songs I've heard from a net head that I listneed to more than once BTW.

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this song was really good man... i just listened to it right now.. i wasnt feeling the beat.. but the song itself was really good.. ur flow was nice the whole way thru.. and the lyrics were good.. this is ur best piece by far.. good job

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My Lines Are ILL yo

Ok you open wit the hook......hook is kool but coulda been stronger....but it was catchy in its own right....ok first verse is real basic....delivery is good not spectacular but you got general idea of how to ride the beat....the flow was koo but rhyme scheme was terrible....way too basic an lacked any real chnage ups...2nd verse....came in same as u did in first verse which is bad you lacking any change up its makin song somewhat boring...again delivery was koo an flow was koo but scheme was wack....ok 3rd verse....you changed up delivery a lil which was koo u didn't really need drastic change ups jus subtle ones so the 3rd verse was pleasant surprise....but the flow seems rushed here...however story was delevoped good...nice ending...the beat an quality was nice it really carried this track over the top...all in all it wasn't a bad song at all def a good listen.....I give it a 7.5/10

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Beat is hot.. You sound like Em, not your style but your voice itself. Lyrics were aight, flow and delivery were straight as well.. nice shit, i seen you been elevating, lately.. good job. it's catchy and makes me want to play it again. lol.

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werd you do sound like EM far as your voice goes hahaa...and yes your hook was quite catchy, good job on that...flow could've been better on the 2nd and 3rd verse and yeah you prolly should've changed something up cuz you're on the same level throughout...this is a good track though man...hope your oppponent comes as nicely as you did...

P.S. thanx 4 posting early instead of no-showing

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^ your more than welcome..im going on a lil trip to the beach for a few days...so i had to hurry and get it up.....thanks for the feed everyone...i truly appreciate it

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i love this beat, and your voice gave it a different sense to the song, but brought it together by your flow........The storyline was ok, but could have been a little....and the Chorus was ok, but to me, it didnt fit the beat

Quality was superior..........

8/10

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The presence is nice...beat is aite.. deliverywise....it was cool didnt really like the 1st verse compared to the other cuz 1st seemed basic but i was feeling it deffinitly...keep spitting fam

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man this beat had so much potential when I heard the melody...but whoever made it fucked that all up


ur flow is pretty decent...ur delivery was good in my opinion

lyrics were coo

solid joint dawg


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Youtube Video for my song "CARRY ON"

Aight, at first I wasn't liking this song. Maybe cuz of my mood, iono. But as the beat kept going I started to like it more. Your voice was kinda airy in the beginning, but it got better through the song. Your voice got stronger, and your flow improved cuz of it. Lyrically, you did well. Though I expected that from your other songs. Going off the rhyme scheme sometimes made me go blah, but it helped as well. Flow was rushed sometimes though it helped mix it up. Overall, I liked this song, but it isn't something I would play all the time. Only if my mood suits it, ya know? 8.5/10

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