I havn't written any full songs, I mostly freestyle with my friends. Heres a little of my work from the cypher place:


All of you are nothing more then shitty copies of 50 cent,
Hope you know that the gangsta cards spent.
Incorrect grammar and spelling mistakes,
The sound in my ears, worse then gravel and rakes,
At the sound of your rhymes china shatters and breaks.
Rap could do without a mistake like you,
I don't pretend to be gangsta, look closely its true.
So I pass the mic to my fellow cypher, rap like you mean it
But please, no more of this gangster shit.


And:

Did my post make you mad?
I’m sorry if I hurt you so bad.
Do you see me standing here mic in hand,
Tell you the truth your gangster shit is sort of bland.
Who do you think I try to be?
Fuck it all, you’re just a buck toothed bitch from Tennessee,
What motherfucker, trying to start some shit with me?
You don’t understand,nothing more then shit spewing from your mouth to the mic
Get your fat ass from the couch to a bike.
Can you see what I mean?
I tore you apart, seam for seam.
Now get it through your fat fucking head,
Cunts like you are better off dead.



As you can see, I kick some ass, and To let you guys know, I don't rap gangster style.

You don't rap "gangster style"? lol

Look, don't get cocky, you still need to elevate and shit.
All of your lines rhyme with simple words, try to make it a bit more complicated than that, man.

g/l

Alright dude, thanks. No I'm not into the 'I'll busta cap in your ass' kind of rap. I think it has given rap a bad name. So like, how the fuck do I get ito one of these groups?

Go to the new crew thread and go to one of the crews and try-out!

A question: do i post in one of their threads or...?

Most of them have a try-out threaad then u jus put down ur verse! But if it dont then u jus ask sumone in that thread where to try-out for the crew at! U get wat im sayin?

Yeah, I understand!

You're whack!

I may be 'wack' but you are a slimy, braindead fuck, that fact is inescapable. Now don't pretend that you know what half of these words mean becase the truth is you are devoid of an brains or ability to rap.

Hahahah, I kid I kid. How am I wack though, seriously?

Let me rephrase that. You may be an okay guy, but your rhymes are weak.

how? Some sort of advice would help

Too basic, no wordplay.

Shut the Fuck up you suck.

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War|Pestilence|
Death|Famine|

|Atrocious|
|Corruptive|Depraved|
|Heinous|Malevolent|Sinister|

That's pretty fucking evil to me.....

He's better then you, low life pussy bitch.