a simple flow for a simple ho/
Niggas wen i roll deep/i make em sleep/
got S.O.S (Shoot On Site) on my name/Crazy's da fame/
LiL LoCo is da game/ not scared nobody/
yall wnna fuck den release dis hound from his cage/
dis pent up rage-ima snap/slap/and clap yall haters/
ill enter the knife into your windpipe/swipe yo chain/
i reign as da battle king/fuck bling bling its bout da "KiNG KiNG"/
ill "Sling Sling" my glock into your sternum/niggas ill burn um/
the shells uve earned um/this concerns um/
if this was a card game you woulda folded/
u cant control dis/i roll gliss (slang for u niggas in da hood )/
even an uzi couldn't move me-u can't lose me/
im like 5-0 i neva stop comin/im still slummin/
and i be makin lots of cash-got lots of stash/
burned u like cig ash-im lethal like a posionous rash/
ill bash my gun into your face/
drop you to the ground scream like u got maced/
my fuckin coke is laced/my fuckin weed is paced/
shit is sad its supposed to be the other way round/
pop pop-thats the sound- to run/that ain't my gun/
that ain't my tec-that aint my mac-thats yo neck/
fellin the "slack" of yo skin curlin ur bone/
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WOW...
when you said simple i didnt think you meant it. Given that it was simple it was still done fairly well. I managed to find the flow, it just seems that the pace moved up and down throught the whole thing. The vocab was VERY simple, but none the less you got the point across (less is more?). I was kinda confused as how to take these line:

and i be makin lots of cash-got lots of stash/
burned u like cig ash-im lethal like a posionous rash/

where the "-" suppose to make the words go faster... i tried like 3 times to find the rhyme.

'Sides that it was good.... 6/10
next time try complex flow (not sure what that is)

P.S. HOW THE FUCK DO YOU HAVE THE SCROLL BAR THING IN YOUR SIG... I WANT ONE