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View Poll Results: Worthy Of Open Mic Of October???
Yes 3 37.50%
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Old 10-17-04, 10:47 AM   #16
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this is alright.....the emotion and flow is there..........creativity is needed more to make it more interesting......u could of used multies to make ur piece even better.....just keep droppin and things will come....not good enough for open mic of oct. cuz my piece is in the picture...LOL................

anyway return feed under my freeflow "leGenD is BorN"<< open mic of oct 100%


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Old 10-17-04, 02:29 PM   #17
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Voted Worthy......
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Old 10-17-04, 02:42 PM   #18
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ok it was good but not great so no to open mic of oct but still hot give it 7/10
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Old 10-17-04, 02:52 PM   #19
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I could tell some thought and time went into this so for effort I give=5/5
flow was aight could've been better,
maybe sound better on audio so for that I give= 2/5
vocabulary was dry so I give vocab.=2/5
And overall consept was aight but I think bush is tight so I give consept and opinions=3/5

you shoulda put it in a more general perspective, I understand u gotta be sincere on some stuff but jus didnt feel right. Um, I do respect the topic tho so for good choice of topic I give=4/5
KEEEPPPPP ELEVATIN and maybe u'll get openmic of November, jus aint crackin right now
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Old 10-18-04, 03:11 PM   #20
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Upping This Once Again...
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Old 10-18-04, 03:41 PM   #21
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This was ok, for what it was....

I honestly think you tried to hard in this peice,

Vocab was there, and good wordplay and shit. Just didnt really feel it at all...

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