8-10 bars u spit first check in and spit when u ready

ok che... i'll drop at ether 12:30 or when i get home

nah man u wanna battle so spit now holla

ok whatever


He keeps every thing hidden in this universe
His punches, his record, cuz to him it’s a curse
Punches missin me like lonely love letters
Type you as the title but still wouldn’t be the Header
Go back to NBA live cuz your ballin is rehearsed
Let me spit first cuz you rap needs to be re-versed
This dude is new Rhyme bittin, so bite real fast
Dracula tactics don’t work rely on d/r at last
Lose to this newb and that’s low slumin
Lubricate and masterbate and try to keep comein

and you must be stupid righting 8 bars....8 bars = 16 lines stupid

10 lines min

My Vigor Is The Temper To Be Quick To Squeeze A Trigger, Kid Im Untouchable While You More Expendable Than An Action Figure.../
I Creep, Murder You 40 Ways To See That You Deceased, E-Dubz Eats This Pest Rapidly Like He Was Attending A Rap Feast.../
You Better Not Pur Cuz Ill Show You How I Eat Cats Like Peeps In The Far East, So You Could Get A Step Stool And Still Not Hold Rank Like A Depriest../
While Pretty Boy Check Himself For Complexion.../
Dont Push Your Luck u aint Taking A Year To Get Erection, Ill Rip You Open And Grab Your Insides Like A C Section.../
I'll have a heater crush ya thoughts cuz you winnin this is only in your imagination like you was exaggratin dat someones actally FEELIN YA SHIT,when youz sprung off ya MASTERBATION!/

lets get some votes on dis shyt holla

Aight, Balla stop just talkin bout killin people, cause it sounds weak, Exo gets my vote fo this, he threw puches, weak ones, put at least they connected

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Aiight I feel That bala's shit was prewritten cuz he went from horrible to mediocre in hours. That scares me a little. Ex dropped a good drop but got smoked in the end. Balla had better punches and flow. Ex had at least one personnal, so ya'll need to werk on that

VOte-balla

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uppin fo votes.............

aight well balla69 your structure wasn't the best but don't affect anything
ex you ain't throw much punches at all so I would have to say Balla takes
this real easily more punches

vote goes to: balla69

vote on mine honest vote aight:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125133

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keep votin on dis battle close it out holla

vote on dis shyt...holla....

Vote- balla
I liked the mini multis he threw off in his piece... THis is some of your better shit, keep it up.
genius your shit was koo too, i jus felt that balla threw in those multis...1

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