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DQ.... too many battles open

Invader_ZIM has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-04 05:21 AM.

yo check this shit this guy talks all big and bad tellin me he dont wanna battle cuz im new well that sounds kinda pussyish to me you fuckin jew and im hittla ima murdda you bitch leave ya cryin with a everlastin itch you got nuthin but ya fuckin mouth runnin you think your sick but you just take to much dick you prolly think yr gunna win not this time noep after im dont wit ya youll neva win agin dont hat ecuz the new kid on the block just mad you sux cock or wait you did already ill start off slow and steddy then hit ya with right ya ready i dont think you wanna live know how i know you batteld me ima be a nicve guy this time and set you free wut

Mad Dog has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-04 05:29 AM.

Damn this fag sounds like the game made by Atari,
A noob wit a mouth this loud...only gonn leave here scarry,

He shook he can't say his own name he's stuttering,
A Zim-zim-zimmerframe's the only way u wondering,

Shouldn't of accepted this coz wins are suppposed to be the aim,
Frustrated coz Pop Idol wouldn't give ya fame so he rippin on ma name,

Ain't gonn get ya no-where except eternal pain,
Like a true fag loves the gang banging jus 4 the groin strain,

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U virgin of rap another wack cat saw 8 mile & said "thats where my lifes at",
U hurtin u crap another dose of crack & u be on ur back faster than the speed of a gat,

Fuck this fag ass i save the 1st class for people wit respectable status,
U could be big bass or crave expensive glass but u h8 so u'll never be famous,

Fuck it i'm done on this herb bring them votes in

wut was all that mumbo jumbo about not wantin to battle me cuz i was new that rap suxed and u do to peace B E Z

oh no-1 can see ur swaying so i'd stop there......

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Voted For: Mad Dog

invader...no structur, completely ruined any flow,no punches of any note at all. i think u kinda wrote that like a piece ud spit on a mic, u new but that aint gona wrk in txt.
take a look at mad dogs piece....set ur verses like that,rhyme your words at the end of each line,n try cum up wit original complex wordplay n punches.
elevate...

mad dog...did enough to win.beta struc,flow.multies.metas...blah..everythin.
ur punches were ok...good wordplay
like the metas.
not ur hardest piece,but easy enough.....

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Voted For: Mad Dog

Lol Invader come ok didn't really feel the flow, punchs
didn't really connect and I didnt like the sturc. it come
like a story or something elevate man.

Mad dog come nice in this one didn't go hard on this cat
but it would have been funny if he did. Punchs hit hard,
had personals and good flow. You used better vocab and
you verse was complex other then Invaders...


Vote ~ Mad Dog

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upp not that i'm proud of this jus schooling mouthy noobs

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Voted For: Mad Dog

aiight this was simple....
Mad dog got it in every department...

Flow- Mad
Punches- Mad
Structure- Mad
Multies- Mad
Vocab- Mad

ok, ZIM, basically you need to put your rhymes in a structure instead of just carrying them on and on without pressing enter. text is very different from live/audio battling and i recomment that you read the tutorials on this site before battling again.

vote- Mad Dog


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ay yall thanxs for the advice i wanted to go aginst a vet so i could get a grip so thanks and mad dog all that talk i sed was just to get my additude up y aknow if ya got any addvise halla thanks erybody peace B E Z

Aight cool uppin dis thread 4 them ma fuckin votes

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