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06-16-03, 11:27 PM | #1 | |
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~Sick Muthafucka~...
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feedback...
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06-16-03, 11:34 PM | #2 | |
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...........
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06-17-03, 05:59 PM | #3 | |
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ok....?
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06-17-03, 10:36 PM | #4 | |
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OH CHRIST.
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06-18-03, 09:16 AM | #5 | |
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u like to follow me dont u ?
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06-18-03, 05:48 PM | #6 | |
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^^ uppin
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06-18-03, 05:53 PM | #7 | |
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dats was OK
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06-18-03, 07:36 PM | #8 | |
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I thought it was straight...Tight Work Kid!!!
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06-18-03, 08:16 PM | #9 | |
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iight thanx for the feedback...
keelo i told u, ur a hater Last edited by swizzerve : 06-19-03 at 06:05 PM. |
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06-19-03, 06:06 PM | #10 | |
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^^^^^^^^^^ uupppiiinnn
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06-21-03, 12:24 AM | #11 | |
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need some feedback plz...
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06-21-03, 02:24 AM | #12 | |
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heard this beat before, my boy rhymed to this
humm, on the real dawg, im not really feeling this, you aint got no flow, lyrics is weak, delivery is aright, but i dono, aint really laugh to any of the shit u said,kinda gay,but whatever yo this just my opinion, but you should defenitly work on a flow and stronger lyrics, with dope punchlines and shit... anyways yo keep on spittin peace |
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06-21-03, 08:04 PM | #13 | |
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ok... uh.. wut do u mean when u say "delivery"... and how do i improve on my flow ?
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06-22-03, 06:19 PM | #14 | |
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^^uppin
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