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FairInHeight...

What the Fah?...Fair.. your strait pathetic
Your a waste of credits,Some one call a Paramedic...
Yeh I said it...Fairy, Your days are number'd
Low in fahrenheit even witta verse dats sun'burn'd...
You can spit them retarded sig riddle's all day,
Da fuck I care, I aint got nuttin gainst Gays
I flo wit hetero's jus like homo's they all the same
99% aint got game,But that's OK...
Only dynasty's soldiers is left to blame
Congrat's tho...U made me key up a whole 5 minutes...
Same amount of time that this gon take u to the Clinique

he says he jet, thinks his body's darkened, theres no such thing as black johnny carson/
tries being tactical and rocket launchin, but the problem's the rocket's launched from bostom/

so you're straight out the boondocks eh, well messin wit t.o. that's just upid-stay/
well say anything, all that you can say, still you cheat the rap game for quadroople a's/

he plays heh ya still he's an outer-cast, won't get applause teaching infants how to clap /
tried makin words rhyme, n rewound em fast, cuz u can't sound a rap, if you pound on glass/

so why'd you challenge me, i be the realest, hes totally fake yo hes just cheese wiz/
neglected in chatroom's an ebay reject, the only t-dot mc you beat's named
t-west/
(t-west is his first challenger ever who's from toronto)

why you battlin me, lowerin your pride states, i 'm called FairInHeight, ur votes inclined mate/
you best just give up get your vibes, straight a kid name jet just got merked by a flyweight/

i meant to say decline at the end sorry uppin

first off, fair change ur structure. no spaces in between bars. breakdown:

punches - jet: urs were better than fair, easily said...

flow - jet: went all together, nice job, fairs went off...

multis - jet: fair didnt have any...

personals - tie: both had mad personals...

structure - jet: easily won, change ur structure...

nice job jet and fair, but carson took this one...

vote - carsonjetx2

return da favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111066

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1. Fake Personal's (t-west one)
2. 20 lines 4 lines in each bar
3. I don't care tho.....lol

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carsonjetX2
you had a nice compact verse, with good punches in thier,
wordplay was nice, an some good multies combined with a few personals!

best bar


Fairnheight
struture was off, you seemed to be goin for more multies than punches, they hardly hit, some attempts at wordplay!
no quoteables!!


vote carson
better verse, harder hitting punches, a easy win

plz drop an honest vote on that
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111180

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punches cj: Da fuck I care, I aint got nuttin gainst Gays
I flo wit hetero's jus like homo's they all the same

metas cj: What the Fah?...Fair.. your strait pathetic
Your a waste of credits,Some one call a Paramedic.. (kinda)

paersonals cj: Yeh I said it...Fairy, Your days are number'd
Low in fahrenheit even witta verse dats sun'burn'd...

peep mine please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110386

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom

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I have to drop this to Carson. He had his shit together. I would vote if I could.

Carson you gave your view on mine, but you didn't vote. holla back.

Carson...ur verse flowed nicely...but some of the rhymes were really weak..but then again u prolly didn't spend much time on it...

Fair In Height...all you needed was like..2 good punches in that verse and a better structure and you would have it dude....ur rhymes are good, n ur vocab is decent..but you just gotta fix some of ur shit...ur structure is horrible too..

vote- Carson Jet

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=107780&page=2

^ battle with Village Pimp..needs votes..

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