Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No hate votes
NO Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-07-05 at 01:12 PM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

Problem Child has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-05 01:13 PM.

imma jus flip da scrcipt/imma break ya
down like tha titanic ship/cuz u kno i
give nuttin but chillz/like a prostitute
hoe u gone gimmie tha billz/Mad hoez
ask bevis i get nuttin butt head/u probably
thought u was gonna win butt i stay ahead/
by now nigga,u should now my style/I don't
battle homo niggaz like u, who see dick and
smile/so imma end right here quick/like tha toilet
bowl u jus facin shit/

Kid Chaos has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-05 03:05 PM.

youve been annilated downgraded and humilated//
the battle hasn't even begun and you already eliminated//

my flow is to powerful you cant stop~it the small rhymes you spit i can bet ill top~it//
and yo hoe was so enjoyable but now this battle ill lock~it and put this shit in my "pock~et"//

await your "dropped-spit" tho i can "block~your~attack"//
you bein "knocked~bitch" its "shocked~shit" when i "rock~this~black~cat"//

this childs only problem is the battles he losin see//
after the votes are in this lose equals three!//

youve entered the "hell~zone" and you recievin "shots to yo dome"//
im bringin this battle home punches strikin you in yo dental//
i killed this mental while rappin to this Who Wanna intrumental//

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Child Of Chaos

a bitch dont tell ppl 2 vote fo u lets do this clean votes iight

need votes uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!

i was talkin about return the favor by votin on whateva battle they may hav fuckin dumbass.....stupidest shit u said yet

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Child Of Chaos

Voted For: Kid Chaos

this was a pretty close battle to tell you the truth, but right here kid chaos ur punches just won it for you good job man...problem child no hate to you ur verse just lacked structure and flow likd chaos....though ur punches were hitten hard at times...just didnt cut it .....so v/kid chaos

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Child Of Chaos

need votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !

uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!fo sum damn votes

Voted For: Kid Chaos

imma jus flip da scrcipt/imma break ya
down like tha titanic ship/
^^No punch...0/10
cuz u kno i
give nuttin but chillz/like a prostitute
hoe u gone gimmie tha billz/
^^No punch....0/10
Mad hoez
ask bevis i get nuttin butt head/u probably
thought u was gonna win butt i stay ahead/
^^bitten of Big L....0/10
by now nigga,u should now my style/I don't
battle homo niggaz like u, who see dick and
smile/
^^No punch....0/10
so imma end right here quick/like tha toilet
bowl u jus facin shit/
^^A punch for once...but whack...1/10

OK...only one punch...and that was the last bar.You need to read the tutorials.And that beavis/but-head shit is bitten of Big L in 98' Freestyle.You were bassically talking about yourself the whole verse.Just diss with some wordplay and metas.

youve been annilated downgraded and humilated//
the battle hasn't even begun and you already eliminated//
^^No punch.....0/10
my flow is to powerful you cant stop~it the small rhymes you spit i can bet ill top~it//
and yo hoe was so enjoyable but now this battle ill lock~it and put this shit in my "pock~et"//
^WHack.....2/10
await your "dropped-spit" tho i can "block~your~attack"//
you bein "knocked~bitch" its "shocked~shit" when i "rock~this~black~cat"//
^^No punch....0/10
this childs only problem is the battles he losin see//
after the votes are in this lose equals three!//
^^a punch..but weak as it gets...1/10
youve entered the "hell~zone" and you recievin "shots to yo dome"//
im bringin this battle home punches strikin you in yo dental//
^^Whack....1/10
i killed this mental while rappin to this Who Wanna intrumental//
^^gonna finish that bar?

Ok...you too were talking about yourself too much.Focus on disssing and that only.And stop with the (~) and (//)..just fucks up structure and makes it look newbish.But the reason you got the win is cause you had more than one punch in your verse...while the other guy had one.Elevation is needed here.

Vote-KidChaos
rtf bELOW PLEASE
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