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I couldnt imagine the chicks u get,prolly need a barf bag
if u see a bitches name on the caller ID,u better turn in the dog tags.
ur broke ass couldnt vacate the states n visit attractive dimes
if u ever join sum cruise,it'll be the 1's that arent active online
TEF doesnt werk at KFC or sum shack,cookin up bits an chunks
but he fucks with fryers...plus a couple other religous monks
I know gay jokes are play'd,but hes match'n me beyond fare
I'd drop hostile..but TEF's broke ass couldnt afford to be lodge'd there.
so take ur wack ass 2 a new site,an keep step'n u bum huss
u'll never compare here or have lichen.... ull just b a fungus among us

pz.

your links are Bull Shit from last week... .....why?

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

I wasnt around for last week..to vote on much..sorry best i could do.Lol.

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ur broke ass couldnt vacate the states n visit attractive dimes
if u ever join sum cruise,it'll be the 1's that arent active online

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He was Scared my 3rd week, he no showed b4 my feat hit this geek
I'm not talkin violent mexicans when I say His-Panic beat 'em that week
His Old screen name's Vlad, watch my slugz pop his brain a loose
So when I throw V-8? I gurantee I'm not tossin tomato Juice
Let me mention this homo's in danger and his straight friends is phony
I coulda saved the gay jokes...but I don't wanna rescue him or his homies

ok battle...Tef came out slow in my opinon. But was more consistant then Pros in this battle wich kept him getting more quotables to win my vote

V/Tef

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I couldnt imagine the chicks u get,prolly need a barf bag
if u see a bitches name on the caller ID,u better turn in the dog tags.
^^Funny concept - poor execution.

ur broke ass couldnt vacate the states n visit attractive dimes
if u ever join sum cruise,it'll be the 1's that arent active online
^^Ehh, cruise/crews is played.

TEF doesnt werk at KFC or sum shack,cookin up bits an chunks
but he fucks with fryers...plus a couple other religous monks
^^Ha.

I know gay jokes are play'd,but hes match'n me beyond fare
I'd drop hostile..but TEF's broke ass couldnt afford to be lodge'd there.
^^Real pronunciation stretch. Weak.

so take ur wack ass 2 a new site,an keep step'n u bum huss
u'll never compare here or have lichen.... ull just b a fungus among us
^^Poor execution.




TEF

I pulled my hair out at his boring punches, they don't Fair well
So Prostyle is neeeded...I gotta call him to borrow the hair Gel
^^Weak nameplay.

If prosecuting Cops make you dope we wish dude was dead
P's rap's maybe ILL advised..
...but he aint sick E-nuff to need 2 Sudafeds
^^Blah.

He was Scared my 3rd week, he no showed b4 my feat hit this geek
I'm not talkin violent mexicans when I say His-Panic beat 'em that week
^^Bad wording - good concept.

His Old screen name's Vlad, watch my slugz pop his brain a loose
So when I throw V-8? I gurantee I'm not tossin tomato Juice
^^Same as before.

Let me mention this homo's in danger and his straight friends is phony
I coulda saved the gay jokes...but I don't wanna rescue him or his homies
^^Good close.


TEF gets this based on consistency. It seems like Pros rushed this week and came off with a shoddy verse.

Vote: TEF

ur broke ass couldnt vacate the states n visit attractive dimes
if u ever join sum cruise,it'll be the 1's that arent active online

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He was Scared my 3rd week, he no showed b4 my feat hit this geek
I'm not talkin violent mexicans when I say His-Panic beat 'em that week
His Old screen name's Vlad, watch my slugz pop his brain a loose
So when I throw V-8? I gurantee I'm not tossin tomato Juice

Explanation:I think Tef got this one, more consistent. His-panic line, was tight, i was diggin that. Pro had an alright opener but never really went anywhere after that

V/Tef

ur broke ass couldnt vacate the states n visit attractive dimes
if u ever join sum cruise,it'll be the 1's that arent active online

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He was Scared my 3rd week, he no showed b4 my feat hit this geek
I'm not talkin violent mexicans when I say His-Panic beat 'em that week
His Old screen name's Vlad, watch my slugz pop his brain a loose
So when I throw V-8? I gurantee I'm not tossin tomato Juice
Let me mention this homo's in danger and his straight friends is phony
I coulda saved the gay jokes...but I don't wanna rescue him or his homies

v/tef

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I pulled my hair out at his boring punches, they don't Fair well
So Prostyle is neeeded...I gotta call him to borrow the hair Ge
He was Scared my 3rd week, he no showed b4 my feat hit this geek
I'm not talkin violent mexicans when I say His-Panic beat 'em that week
His Old screen name's Vlad, watch my slugz pop his brain a loose
So when I throw V-8? I gurantee I'm not tossin tomato Juice

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ur broke ass couldnt vacate the states n visit attractive dimes
if u ever join sum cruise,it'll be the 1's that arent active online

pro this wasnt too good of a verse 4 you, the concepts werent effective enough
you need more creativity in ya verse but keep working on your wording and you be good
tef you had a good verse i dug it ebough to give you the vote
v/ tef

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