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04-04-06, 09:47 AM | #1 | ||||||
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THA Luna tik (freestyle) Must read
IP: 1FAE 749F
Yo Lunatiks tha rookie dat can serve da vets
U ain’t serve tha reps, u were meant to make spills and watch me clean it like serviettes Demolition krew, u build yo walls and in chorus watch it all shattered U couldn’t git piss like me if u had problems with yo gallbladder (Whoa) Look! stop wit tha bullshit, u can’t come at me with a 40 Cal and Tech Cuz my artillery is aged but adept, u fucking with a Falconet Then again maybe a Howitzer, u blo wind storms while Lunatik blows twisters Is his flo sicker, yes, I don’t waste spit I pour tha whole pitcher (Wow) Bring yo whole krew, yo brother and cousin can’t rid dis street sweeper I’ll tear u and then grind yo family roots up like a weed eater (Damn) U aint gangsta,sad when blind men can see a fake G too U can keep wit rappin at concerts, i’ll stick wit blowing sites up like I’m owning V-2’s! U ain’t even a hustler, I got tha status of a BOSS Embedded Wut coke? Only powder u coppin, prick, is tha Covergirl Cosmetics (LOL) So now u kno, I got tha flo dat’ll rip-thru G’s If dat fails, a pistol blast will git yo life Unplugged like Alicia Keyes (Ill) Yo, Luna, git at me, these r just warm ups nigga, I want tha title mayne, I’m still a free agent someone holla at me!!!!!!!! U won’t find no-one real as me! HOLLA! Yo Uppin fo feed, or shout outs from krewz, or both. |
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04-04-06, 09:50 AM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 1FAE 749F
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04-09-06, 03:20 PM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
This was pretty decent, wasnt feeling the spaced out lines so much
wordplay was ok, nothing to exciting, umm basically this was an average piece alot of room for improvement keep at it homie |
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04-10-06, 10:39 PM | #4 | ||||
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IP: 5B30 0354
Moved to freestyles
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